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IndlægEmne: Memories   Memories EmptyTirs Okt 07, 2008 7:24 pm

Part 1...

-So you're telling me your not just alittle attracted to him at all? Ann asked when we stood at our lockers before class.
-Yes that's what I'm saying. I just don't see him like that.
-Em, come on! He's totally hot. You're saying you haven't thought about the idear of you and him?
-I've already told you, Harry and I are just friends. Emily defented herself.
-I don't believe you. I mean I have had a crush on him. Ann continued.
-You've had a crush on every guy in the univers. Emily said making fun of Ann.
-But what are you guys then doing when you're together? She asked ignoring what Emily just said.
-You can actully be with a boy without making out with him. She said still teasing Ann. Ann hit her.
-We're talking. Having fun. Just hanging out. She said not wanting Ann to hit her again.
-So you've never done.. anything with him?
-Ann believe me the only sex I have ever gotten from harry was when he showed me his weiner in kindergarden. Ann cracked up laughing.
-What's so funny? Harry asked. He had just gotten here.
-Oh Emily just told the story of the time you showed her your weiner. Harry turned red and looked blaming at Emily. She sent him a big smile.
-Well If you're telling that story I have a story about you.. He said with a stupid grin on his face. Emilys smile disapered.
-No harry? Harry, what is it? She said and jumped on his back. And Harry started to laugh. Harry knew everything about her! He had every emberessing moment and so much more..
-You're so mean. She said and hit him, when she realised he wouldn't tell. The bell rang and he gave her a hug.
-See you in the break. I have fysiks. He said and pulled a face and then he walked away.
Harry and her had been best friends since.. Forever. Nothing could break them up she was sure of that. They had never been in a real fight. The real big issue they had ever had was when he by accident had destroied one of her dolls when she was little. Big issues huh? Now they were 17 and seniors. Next year the two of them together at Manchester college. She couldn't wait. She thought about what Ann had said. And it was actually true she had never thought of Harry like that. had she? he was good looking she couldn't denay that. But they were just.. friends... But the funny thing was that harry was good looking and every girl in school seemed to have alittle thing for him, but he didn't seem to notice.
At one point she had actully thought he was gay, but then she walked in on him watching some not gay porn and the thought quikly dissapered again.
-Ms. Roberts?.. MS. ROBBERTS? She jumped in her chair in shock. Mr. Adams was actully yelling at her.
-Uh. Sorry Mr. She said and snapped out of her thoughts. He gave her a hatefull Look. 'It's not my fault your class is deadly boring' she thought and started to draw on the table.

-Finally off! Harry said as they were walking to his house.
-Know what you mean. She sighed of realief.
-So tell me again why did you tell Ann the weiner story. He said with alittle blaming smile.
-Ann kept asking me if I didn't have feelings for you. And well I just said that I didn't, the only sex I've ever gotte from you was well..The weiner episode. She said and he cracked up laughing.
-Well we can change that. He said in a grin and blinked at her.
-Harry? Eww. She said and pushed him.

They got in and Harrys mom was in the kitchen.
-Hey Emma. She said with a smile.
-Hi Emily. So how's things at home? She asked and Emily was about to answer.
His mom knew all about her issues at home. Emily was there so often, almost evey day after school. And she often spent the night when she couldn't take it at home. Everything at home was a mess. Her paretns were devorst. Her mom had just gotten married again to an awfull guy! She hated him, and he insisded on she called him 'Dad' Everytime she heard him speak to her like he was her real dad she wanted to throw up! Her mom didn't seem to notice. Well she was also bussy being pregnant. She actully wanted to live with her dad, but he had moved to france because of his job. So there she was. Besides she didn't wanna leave Harry.
-Not now mom. He said and pulled her up the stairs.
-I've got something to show you he said with a big smile.
-What is it? She asked exited. She threw herself at his bed and he lied down beside her and gave her a page from a paper.
-What's this? She asked and looked at him, not bothered to start reading.
-An auditon. It's a new band, they're looking for a drummer and a bass player and I just thought...
-Oh my god Harry, that's so cool! She said with the biggest smile and he felt happy. Happy that she supported him, but then again he knew she would.
-You're so gonna get it.
-That's not sure.
-Are you kidding me you're an amazing drummer. She said and gave him a hug:
-When is it?
-Friday. I was thinking will you come with me?
-Of course. Wouldn't miss it for the world. I would come even if you asked me to stay away. He smiled and gave her another hug. He loved so much that she always supported him no matter what. But on the other hand she always said what was on her mind. Which he loved even more. There was nothing fake about her.

Friday came and Harry was deadly nervours. He sat watching some of the other guys at the audition. How was he gonna be better then all of them? Emily looked at him and kinda knew what he was thinking. She took his hand.
-I'm so gonna mess up. he said.
-No you're not! Harry you're great. Just go kick some arse.. Or bang some drums. She said and it made him smile.
A rather fat guy with a brown-grey beard came out and called his name. He felt the biggest suck in his stomach as he stood up.
-Good luck! She said and gave his hand a sqees before letting go. She watched him go in and as soon as the door was closed she got all his nervours feelings. She stood up and walked to the bathroom. She needed to pee. And maybe to freh up her make up and hair.

When she was in the toilet-boose she heard the door getting pushed open, someone run a few steps and then puik in the toilet next to hers. Ewww. She thought. She opened the door and looked into the other toilet and saw a guy, in baggy shorts on his knees in front of the toilet.
-You know you're in the girls room right? She asked. And he turned his head looking rather pale.
-Sorry. He mumbled. She smiled at him,
-Are you okay?
He nodded:
-Fine. Sorry about the girls room I didn't really have time to notice. He said and she smiled and helped him up. She took a water bottle up from her purse.
-Here. She said and gave it to him. He walked over to the sink and washed his mouth. She looked at him. He didn't look very old. Maybe a year younger than her.
-Thanks he said and was about to give it back.
-You can just keep it. She said and he smiled and threw it in the trash. She stuck her hand down her purse again.
-Want a mint? She asked and he nodded.
- Yes. Thank you..?
-Emily. She said and smiled.
-Thank you Emily. Wouw. You really have everything you need in that purse.
-And more. She said and smiled.
-Well sorry about the puik and all. I'm just.. really nervours. She smiled and put a hand on his shoulder.
-Are you auditioning? He then asked.
-No. no, I don't think I really have the pations to learn how to play. I'm just with my friend. Oh He actully might be done. So I'm gonna go again. She said.
-Well good luck to you. She said with a smile before walking out of the bathroom.
The puiking guy walked out after her. She looked cute. He thought to him self sucking on the mint she gave her trying to get that discusting taste away.
When he walked out he stopped and saw her standing in front of another guy.
-I told you you were gonna do good! He heard her say and then they hugged for a looong time. Lucky dude. He thought to him self.
-Dougie Poynter. He heard someone say then forgot all about the girl with the mint and felt the sick feeling again...


-When are you gonna hear from them? She asked a couple of days later when they were lying on his bed watching a movie.
-Don't know. He said still looking at the screen:
-As soon as possible I guess. She sighed and he turned his head and looked at her.
-This film is boring! She said in a complaining voice.
-No it's not!
-Yes it is! She laughed and hit him with a pillow. He started to tickle her and she couldn't stop laughing.
-Harry noo! Stooop! She screamed in between laughs. He carried on but then stopped and they looked at each other. With a look neither of them had seen in each others eyes before.
She leant in and kissed him. They kissed for a while but then he pulled away.
-What are we doing? He asked in shock.
-I don't know. She said and they started to make out again. He took his hand up underneath her shirt and took it off. While she started to unbutton his. More clothes came off and suddenly they were lying in their underwear. Even though he didn't want to, he pulled away and looked at her. It was like, he saw her in a whole new way, his heart was beating fast and he just wanted to hold her.
-Are you sure? He asked in a low voice. And she slowly nooded and then leant forward again...



Okay det var så første del af min nye fic? (: Hvad synes I?
Vidste ikke lige hvad jeg skulle kalde den.
Hehe.. men godt/dårligt? Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyTirs Okt 07, 2008 8:41 pm

virkelig virkelig godt!.. Nok en bedste fic start jeg har læst indtil videre Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyTirs Okt 07, 2008 9:53 pm

Rigtig rigtig godt allerede!!! En af de bedste fic-start jeg har læst indtil nu!! cheers Be proud! Very Happy Glæder mig til mere..
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyTirs Okt 07, 2008 10:01 pm

Det er super godt! cheers Fortsæt endelig Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyOns Okt 08, 2008 7:36 pm

Skide godt Emilie
tror er det er den bedste start jeg har læst ;D
som mange jo også siger (:
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyOns Okt 08, 2008 7:41 pm

Hehe.. Tak alle glad for I kan li det. (: Virkelig glad for I siger det er den bedste start, det er jo sikkert ikke rigtigt. men super fedt I kan li det! xD Men gerne lidt flere kommentare. Razz
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyLør Okt 11, 2008 6:57 pm

Part 2...

Monday morning in school Emily was standing talking to Ann. It was weird. This huge thing had just happened, but she felt like she couldn't tell. It was private. She hadn't really thought about anything else the whole weekend. but she suddenly realised she hadn't really thought about it. What would happen to them? Would they remain friends or.. She got pulled out of her thoughts when she heard Ann say:
-Hi harry! Emily turned around and saw him. Her heart started beating.. fast..
-Hi Ann.. And Emily..
-Hi. She said and realised she blushed. there was an awkward silence were Ann just stood looking from Emiy to Harry and back again.
-Well.. I gotta go... Pee.. He said and almost ran away.
-Oh my god? What's up with you two? Ann Said and looked surspiciously at Emily. Emily didn't answer but felt her cheeks burn.
-Oh my god! You did it! Didn't you? She almost yelled. And some people turned their heads and looked at them. Emily just wanted to die..
-Well, details now! Emily couldn't help but laugh.
-It was.. good. She said and Ann looked dissapointed. Did she really think she was gonna get the jucie details?
-Do you like him? The question she had tried to push away. She didn't answer. It was harry, it was weird!
-You gotta tell him!
-No! Emily almost yelled:
-It was just.. Just a drunken mistake.. But then she realised they hadn't had anything to drink. This time she couldn't blame it on the alcohol. No they had just been.. caught up by the moment. Hadn't they?

More days went by. And harry and Emily hadn't really talked other than a couple of awkward moments in the hall.
Harry hated it! He wanted to talk to her, he missed her! But he couldn't help but think he wanted her to be more than a friend. He was in love and he couldn't denay it.
It was weird, they had known each other forever and now he just saw her completly different. How could he not have noticed how beautiful she was before? Or the way she talked and the way she laughed it was all so amazing.
But what if she wasn't in love with him? What if she just wanted to go back to friends? Would they be able to do that? Well they needed to do something, cause this was just not working!
He decided he was gonna talk to her today after football. When he was playing he saw her stand and watch. He winked at her and she winked back. His heart started beating thinking about what he should say.

-Hi. He said when he got out of the lockerroom:
-Thans for waiting.
-What do you mean, I always wait for you. She smiled
-Yearh. I know, it's just after what happened... She interrupted.
-Yearh about that.. Harry looked at her his heart started to beat faster and faster, what would she say?
-It was just a.. Mistake.. right? She said and looked alittle unsecure. Harrys heart sank. It wasn't a mistake!
-Right.. He just said and tried to smile.
-we just got caught up in the moment. We're better off just friends.. right? she asked again. She didn't want them just to be friends. But she couldn't help but think if she said that and he just wanted to be friends then every thing would be ruined.
-Right.. He said again.
-Good. Cause I don't wanna lose you as a friend. That would suck. She said. He smiled and they hugged. But this time it was different. He noticed he could feel her heart beat, and her hot breath against his neck. He turned his head alittle and smelled her hair.. mm Apple. It smelled of apples...

Someone knocked his door, he was about to yell he wasn't in the mood to speak to anybody.
-There is a call for you Harry. His mom said with a big smile. He took the phone.
-Hallo?..
5 minutes later he was jumping up and down wanted to scream! He had got it! He had gotten in the band! he ran down stairs.
-I got it mom! He said with a huge smile on his face. And he hugged her. He hadn't hugged her for along time. She was about to cry he could see it. Why is it that women are so sensitiv?...


4 years later.

She looked around in the room, now full of boxes. It looked exactly like it had 3 years ago when she moved in. Her roomie had already left. She had no place to stay in london untill she found her own, and that was what she was gonna do today.. Apartment hunting! Yay. How fun! She thought not exited at all, she knew she could only afford some crappy place, but it was better than moving back home.

She stood looking at apartments on sale in a window. No. no.. no.. She was gonna be homeless in london, how great! She took a step back directly into someone and they both fell over.
-oh my god. I'm sorry! She said:
-This day just keeps getting better and better. She said to herself but the person had obviously heard. He laughed alittle.
-here let me help you up. he gave her a hand.
-Thanks. She said and they looked at each other. Hadn't she seen him somewhere before? He was obvioulsly thinking the same. She could see how much his brain was working to place her face.
Then she knew!
-The puiking guy at the audition! She said or almost yelled. He pulled a face.
-I prefer Dougie. He said in a smile and she laughed.
-Sorry, Dougie. I'm..
-Emily right? She nodded surprised that he remembered.
-How could i forget, the girl who gave me a mint. He said smiling. He had a cute smile that flashed his small white teeth.

-Well sorry for making you fall. I was just about to go, no arpartments here. She said and pointed at the window.
-You're looking for a place? He asked and she nodded.
-I'm actully kinda homeless. So that's just great! He laughed at her.
-Well. lets grap a cup of coffe and a paper, and we'll check out the arpartment sektion.
-No I can't ask you to do that.
-Well I still owe you for the mint. He said smiling and she then agreed.

-What about this one? Dougie asked when they were sitting at a cafe.
-Yearh looks great. but do i look like I can afford that. She said laughing even though it wasn't funny.
-Well hmm. he said looking over the page again:
-what about this one? He placed the paper so she could see.
-Yearh. it looks.. okay.. She smiled.
-A two bedroom that was what i was hoping for.
-Well a one would also be cool then you could lie on the bed while cooking! He said and looked like he had just gotten the best idear ever. She laughed at him.
-Let's go tjeck it out then. He said and they went.
She took it and he promised he would help her move in. Who would think it would go this easy?

-Pizzas! She said in a huge grin and Dougie almost threw his pensel. It was a couple of days later and they were painting the new place.
-Thank god, I'm starving! He said. They sat on the floor and started to eat. They were almost finished painting the walls.
-you never really told me what you were doing? She asked.
-Well. I got in the band. He said and smiled. Emily stopped chewing for a second. He knew Harry. She felt weird, exited and angry. Then she smiled.
-Congratulations then. There wasn't really any reason to be nervours then.
-I was just a kid then. He said and she laughed.
-Aren't you still just a kid?
-What do you mean I'm 20! And how old are you? He defented himself
-21. She said laughing and he stuck out his tounge.
-See, you're still just a kid.
-Well what about you what have you been doing since then?
-Well I finished school. Then I was supposed to go to manchester college.. but I changed it so I went to London instead.
-Why? She didn't know what to answer.
-It's alittle complicated.. I had it all planed out. Manchester college, designer school and then.. She looked up at him:
-It just didn't work out the way I thought.. She said and smiled alittle.
-You wanna be a designer? He asked.
-Yearh.. I like to draw.. But It's a tough buisness. I mean it's very few who make it..
-Well you should try! He said and she smiled and looked at the now empty pizza box.
-Let's continue painting. She said and they got up. They painted alittle in silence then she felt a pensel on her cheek and she screamed as the cold wet paint touched her skin. He laughed at her.
-You're so gonna regret that Dougie! She dipped her fingers in the paint and smashed it out in his face. He was all white in his face.
-Aww. you look pale just like the time I first saw you on your knees infront of a toilet. She teased.
-Arrh. you're asking for it! He said and dipped his fingers in the red paint and chased her round in the apartment. Se screamed but he caught her in the end. And sat on top of her
-Noo Dougie! Don't! She screamed but he did.
-You look like an indian! He said laughing. She stuck out her tounge.
-Well who's the child now? He said and she laughed. He didn't move just looked at her. With that look. He slowly leant forward and she felt the butterflies as their lips met. She pulled away a moment later. She looked at him and smiled.
-Alittle too fast. I mean I've only known you for a couple of days. He smiled and moved so they sat next to each other.
-Well actully you've known me for 4 years so it's actully taking it very slow.
-Nice try. She laughed then turned seriours.
-I think it's time to say goodnight. She said and he stood up and helped her up.
-Thanks's for helping Dougie. She said looking into his eyes and kissed his cheek.
-See you tomorrow Emily. He said smiling and walked out.

She stood alittle smiling watching the closed door. He was sweet, but it was weird. She didn't really know him.
She sat down on her knees and started to look in one of the boxes. He had got her to think of Harry. Which she hated. But now and then she looked at all the photos of them. And the half that was left of the only letter he had ever sent her, when it had been a year and she hadn't heard more from him. She had set it on fire. But then regret so now she had a half letter. And alot of pictures.
How could she be that stupid back then! It hadn't meant anything to him. He probably hat forgot all about her a lonng time ago, all about everything they had ever said to each other, laughed at together and done together. She looked at the half letter again with tears in her eyes, she knew every word in and out. She bit her lip and started to rip it into little pieces. And the thought of the day she had found out he was leaving floated into her mind...

Okay hvad synes I? (:
Ved det er et stort sping i tiden, er det godt eller dårligt? Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyLør Okt 11, 2008 9:14 pm

ARGH!! Det er kun 2. afnit, og jeg elsker den her fic allerede!!! cheers Først tænkte jeg Hmm, det var et rimlig stort spring, men jeg synes virkelig du får det til at fungere.. så GODT! Very Happy

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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyLør Okt 11, 2008 9:22 pm

Syntes det er rigtig godt Very Happy
og det gør slet ikk noget med det store spring. det virker rigtig Godt (:
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptySøn Okt 12, 2008 2:37 am

Fuck det er godt altså!!! Aj seriøst kan sgu næsten føle hvordan hun har det!! Det er virkelig virkelig godt!!! Hvordan fanden gør du det på 2 afsnit!!!! Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptySøn Okt 12, 2008 9:57 am

Super godt! Very Happy Jeg er helt hooked på den her fic!! cheers

Du skriver vildt godt Razz Og springet fungerer helt fint Smile .. Jeg havde måske bare håbet på at få deres afsked med Wink

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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptySøn Okt 12, 2008 10:32 am

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Super godt! Very Happy Jeg er helt hooked på den her fic!! cheers

Du skriver vildt godt Razz Og springet fungerer helt fint Smile .. Jeg havde måske bare håbet på at få deres afsked med Wink

Mere snart ? Very Happy

Hehe. .Super glad for i kan li det folkens..
afskeden kommeri flashback. Så don't worry. Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptySøn Okt 12, 2008 11:40 am

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theirstargirl skrev:
Super godt! Very Happy Jeg er helt hooked på den her fic!! cheers

Du skriver vildt godt Razz Og springet fungerer helt fint Smile .. Jeg havde måske bare håbet på at få deres afsked med Wink

Mere snart ? Very Happy

Hehe. .Super glad for i kan li det folkens..
afskeden kommeri flashback. Så don't worry. Very Happy

Super Very Happy - Jeg glæder mig til at læse den Smile
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptySøn Okt 12, 2008 12:07 pm

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Super godt! Very Happy Jeg er helt hooked på den her fic!! cheers

Du skriver vildt godt Razz Og springet fungerer helt fint Smile .. Jeg havde måske bare håbet på at få deres afsked med Wink

Mere snart ? Very Happy

Hehe. .Super glad for i kan li det folkens..
afskeden kommeri flashback. Så don't worry. Very Happy

Super Very Happy - Jeg glæder mig til at læse den Smile

Can't wait for more! Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptySøn Okt 12, 2008 3:35 pm

Glæder mig til at læse den ! Very Happy mere hurtigst muligt..
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptySøn Okt 12, 2008 11:56 pm

Jeg arbejder på sagen. (: Hehe..
Men super fedt i kan li det!
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyTirs Okt 14, 2008 6:10 pm

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Jeg arbejder på sagen. (: Hehe..
Men super fedt i kan li det!

Glæder mig! Very Happy Er blevet helt afhængig! I'm fico-holic? Suspect Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyTirs Okt 14, 2008 9:49 pm

part 3...

Flashback:

He watched her put on her jacket in front of her locker, they had both just gotten off. He took a deep breathe and walked towards her. He knew what he needed to do, tell her he was leaving, but how the fuck should he do that!?
-Hey you! She said and gave him a hug when she saw him. Everything was finally normal and now he had to leave. Or not completly normal he was still in love with her.
-Hi.. So ermm.. Em, I need to talk to you about something. She looked at him and got scared, or maybe it was something about that day.. Good thing he wasn't the one who could become pregnant. She thought. Not a time to joke! She then told her self.
-What is it? You're freaking me out now? She said and tried to smile, he was very rarely this seriours. He smiled a smile he knew would comfort her alittle.
-I'll tell you when we get home okay? She nodded but was about to explode.
They sat on the old swings in his garden. She looked at him, but he didn't say anything.
-Are you like dying or something? She said and it made him smile even though it wasn't funny.
-No no.. It's not that scary. He said and looked down at his feet.
-So what is it?
-It's just.. erm.. I don't now how to... He got interrupted of a phone ringing it was hers.
-2 seconds. she said and got it out of her pocket.
-Hi dad. Or bonjour! She said happily down the phone:
-I can't wait for you to come, it's gonna be so great. You and me in london and that musical you've got tickets for looks amazing. Harry smiled at her, she looked so happy and he knew she was talking so much that her dad couldn't get a word in. Then suddenly her smiled desapered.
-What are you saying? Harry looked at her worried.
-Oh okay.. No no it's okay. Some other time.. No I'm not mad.. Yearh I love you too dad. She said and Harry knew what had happened. Her dad had canceled on her.. again.
He got up from the swing and gave her a hug. He couldn't hear it but he knew she was crying. He hated it.
-Don't cry. We can make something funny, we can go to london. He said, but then again they couldn't cause he was leaving. She pulled away and looked at him and smiled a weak smile. He knew it wasn't really a comfort.
He knew how her and her mom wasn't getting along and how her and her dad.. well they loved each other. he still remembered the night her dad had left. They had sat in his room all night and planned how the two of them would make the best life without their parents! They had been what.. 8..
She dried her eyes.
-So what was it you wanted to tell me?
He sank a lump, he couldn't tell her now it would destroy her. He shoke his head.
-You know what i forgot. It wasn't that important. He said in his best convincing voice and smiled. He gave her a hug more and as he stood there and helt her he really didn't know how to tell her, he was leaving in a fucking week!

It was friday and she stood outside the lockerroom waithing for Harry to come out so they could get home.
-Hey Em. She heard someone say and she looked up and saw Michael her ex.
-Hi she said. things was still weird between them. She was still mad at him, but then again she thought she'd always be.
-Waiting for Judd? He asked and she just nodded, she knew him an Harry hated each other.
-Well it's also to make the best of the time there's left. She looked up at him, what the fuck was he talking about.
-What do you mean? Was this just one of his bad jokes.
-Harry is leaving? Emily's world crashed down when she heard does 3 little words, leaving what the fuck was he talking about?
-You didn't know? He asked and she swore she could se alittle smile on his lips.
-What the hell are you talking about!? She yelled at him and felt tears in her eyes, which she struggled to hold back she didn't want Michael to see her cry.
-That band audition he went to well he got it and now he's moving to London. She felt a couple of drops hit her head. It couldn't be true! He would have told her. the rain started to pour down.
The door opened again and it was Harry he smiled when he saw her, but the smile quikly disapered again when he saw how sad she looked. Then he turned his head and looked at Michael, he couldn't stand that guy!
-What have you done!? He said in an angry tone.
-Dude you're the only one who can answer that. he said and then looked at Emily.
-I'm gonna go before I get completly soaked. Emily felt the well known lump in er throat.
-What is going on? Harry asked and gently grapped her arm. She looked up at him with the most hurten look he had ever seen. And then he knew, she knew.
-Emily.. He begun but she interrupted.
-Just save it Harry! Were you just gonna leave without telling me!?
-No of course not, I just.. I just didn't know how to tell you. I didn't wanna hurt you.
-Well this way you surtainly didn't do that! I can't belive you didn't tell me!
-I tried to tell you! Harry yelled through the rain.
-The day my dad called? She asked in a low voice so he barely could hear it. He nodded.
-I'm sorry i should have told you it's just not easy.
-When are you leaving? She asked alittle more calm, not sure she wanted to know.
-Sunday.
-Sunday! She yelled and he felt bad.
-How long have you known? She then asked and he didn't wanna say.
-For 3 weeks.
-I can't belive you! Harry we tell each other everything!.. Or atleast I thought so. Well have a great time in london! She said gave him one look and then turned around to walk away. She didn't realise untill now how much she was freezing or how wet she was.
-Emily wait! He yelled after her. She could hear him run and a second later he grapped her arm.
-For what!? You're leaving. Leaving me here to rod on my own with my mom and that jerk of a stepdad! She screamed at him, she had never been this sad, not even when her parents got devorst. he didn't say anything. He felt a lump in his throat, she had never screamed at him like that. He wanted her to be okay, he wanted to tell her how he felt.
-Emily don't be mad! You knew when I auditioned that it could happen..
-Yearh! But I didn't know that you were gonna lie to me! Or maybe I just didn't thought about tha fact that you were gonna leave. Her tears got mixed up with the raindrops. She looked at him again and she just wanted to scream! She loved him but right now she hated him! She didn't know she had so many different feelings and it made her confused. She got her arm out of his grip and started to run.

It was the next day , She hadn't left her room since yesterday Harry had called a thousand times but she never picked up. It knocked on the door. She was about to scream that she just wanted to be alone.
-Phone. her mom said.
-Who is it?
-Emma.
Emily felt weird his mom was calling? She picked up the phone.
-Hello?
-Hi Emily. It's Emma.
-Hi. She just said.
-So we're having a going away party for Harry tonight. And I just wanted to know if you wanted to come?
No she didn't wanna come to his stupid going away party! She thought.
-Yearh. Sure. Of course. She said.
-Good. See you at 8. Emily stood up and looked at herself in the mirror. She looked awfull. She realised she was starving and went down to get some food. The doorbell rang. But no one answered.
-Mom the door! She yelled not bothered to open herself. But there came no answer, where the fuck were they? She sighed and went to the door.
She froze when she saw Harry standing there.
-What are you doing here? She just asked.
-Emily I wanna talk to you! I need to talk to you!.. She interrupted.
-Well. your mom already invited me to your going away party. So she saved you the trouble.
-Emily come on..
-Don't worry I'll dress up nicely! She said and slammed the door in his face. She felt the tears burning in her eyes. Why was she beeing such a bitch?
-EMILY! She heard him yell from outside but she ignored him and went upstairs...

She had been avoiding Harry all night at his party. Which actully was quite easy. When everyone was in the livingroom she sneaked into the kitchen and took the half empty bottle of champagne and went upstairs. She pushed the door to Harrys room open and felt a lump in her throat when she saw that everything was gone. it looked so big without the bed the table and the drumkit. She had actully never noticed the colour of the room. But that was because the walls had always been covered up with posters. She took a big sip of the champagne. She could already feel the alcohol taking over her mind. But not in the good happy way it used to. It made her more and more sad for every sip. Her eyes landed on the big sting in the corner of the room. She smiled. She had been 5 years old and had spilt cola on his floor. She remembered she had cried because it coldn't be washed off. She took another big sip of the champagne to wash away the memory.
-What are you doing. She heard Harry say from behind.
-Just enjoying the party. She said in a careless voice and downed the last champagne. She stood up stumbleling and walked for the door.
-Emily, please don't do this, I don't wanna leave like this. She turned around and looked at him.
-Then don't leave harry. She said and felt the tears burning in her eyes.
-You know I can't stay. This is my dream. He said in a low voice and grapped her hand.
-I know.. She said and looked down at his hand:
-But what about our dream? To go to Manchester together.. Harry I can't do it on my own. She said and broke down. The tears started floating and she couldn't do anything to stop it, she looked up at him.
-I can't do it without you Harry. He sat down next to her and helt her.
-Sshh, Don't cry, then you're just gonna make me cry. he said and she smiled a weak smile while crying.
-Of course you can do it without me. You're strong, beautifull, funny. Everyone will love you. It made her cry even harder.
-What am I gonna do without you Harry?
-You'll be fine, sweetie. But please tell me you forgive me, cause I can't leave if you're mad at me? He looked into her eyes and she wanted to say she couldn't forgive him, just to make him stay but she couldn't.
-Of course.. I'm sorry I got mad at you it was just.. You didn't tell me and then of all people I had to hear it from him! She said and for a second got her tears unter contro. But only for a second.
-Harry, what am I gonna do without you?.. What am I gonna do with out you? She kept repeading in a low voice.
-Ssh.. He said and a silent tear ran down his cheek as he tried to make her calm. He realised that as he helt her like that he didn't wanna let go, he didn't wanna hurt her.
-I love you Harry.. She whispered. And it was like his heart skipt a beat.
-I... He began but she put her finger on his lip.
-Don't say it.. I don't wanna know. It will just make everything harder...

*

She whiped away her tears. She couldn't bare think of it anymore. Couldn't bar think of the next day when she had seen him for the last time.
She had really meant what she said when she said she loved him. She really really had.. But was he gonna say it back, when she stopped him? Now she doubted it.

I touch you once, I touch you twice
I won't let go at any price.
I need you now like I needed you then.
You always said we'd still be freinds someday...



Hvad synes I? Very Happy
Godt/dårligt?
Får i nok at vide I flasbacket..
let me know... Razz
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyTirs Okt 14, 2008 11:19 pm

Undskyld jeg først er begyndt at læse nu Razz
Men hold fast hvor er den bare god. Sidste afsnit er godt nok lige til at hyle over, hehe.
Du skriver virkelig godt, og det hele fungerer super (:
Jeg glæder mig rigtig meget til mere, jeg er helt skudt i din fic Shocked haha
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyTirs Okt 14, 2008 11:32 pm

oj oj oj
det er briliant godt søde haha <3

undskyldt der underlige ordforråd men det er mig i en nødeskald haha.
jeg skal nok stoppe. (:

- men det er bare super duper (:
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyOns Okt 15, 2008 2:00 am

IIH! Det er bare så godt! Jeg sidder bare her med en klump i halsen og tårer i øjnene!(Specielt fordi jeg hører the end som bare gør det værre!) Det er bare fanatisk fantastisk! Det er virkelig godt! BRAVO! Very Happy


Men ja, man får akkurat det man skal have at vide i flashbacket(?) Very Happy

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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyOns Okt 15, 2008 9:01 am

Årh, tear tear -.-
Fantastisk afsnit! cheers - Du skriver vildt godt Very Happy
Og ligesom Sarah er jeg helt skudt i den .. Razz

I neeed more!! Very Happy:D
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyOns Okt 15, 2008 3:30 pm

Ej hvor er det altså godt, når jeg først er begyndt på at afsnit vil jeg bare læse mere!! Du skriver rigitig godt, og ligesom de andre er jeg skudt i den her fic cheers
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Memories   Memories EmptyOns Okt 15, 2008 4:57 pm

Hehe.. Wow.. Mange tak alle sammen. (: Ved ikke hvad jeg ellers skal sige. hber i bliver ved med at synes om det.. Very Happy
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