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Sad hahah....

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Så er der lige noget igen =D

The next day Sally got up at 8 am, she wanted to make breakfast for Ann. She didn’t wake Anita and wrote a note to her and put it on the table, to let her know that she was going over to the store to buy something for breakfast.
Sally walked out and went over looking in the different stores. She remembered a good food store, there was in a mall, where her and Ann had been at when they were shopping. Sally walked in to the store and walked over to the elevator and pressed the button and waited for the doors to open. The doors suddenly opened and Sally was about to walk in to the elevator when she in a shock saw Harry almost kissing a girl in the elevator. He looked up and saw Sally standing there shocked, he couldn’t move, Sally couldn’t neither, but she started smiling at him, Andrea” ehm babe, do you know this girl” she said while pulling on Harry to follow her out of the elevator.
Sally was about to say yes, when Harry suddenly said, “ No babe, it’s probably a fan.” Sally’s smile faded away immediately, Harry was looking back to see her very hurt. Sally walked in to the elevator and the doors closed. Sally closed her eyes, she couldn’t believe this, how could he! She felt like, she had gotten the biggest fist, in her stomach, like all of her breath was taken away. She was in tears, but she had to pull her self together. She walked out of the elevator, she bought the things fast and ran home as fast as she could.
Ann was up and had taken a shower and was now dressed, she had cleared her mind and wasn’t so upset any longer. She was watching the telly waiting for Sally, when she heard the door open and slam.
Ann, “ Sally is that you?”
Sally, “ yes it’s me.” she said in a upset voice.
Ann, “ Sally what’s wrong?.”
Sally walked in with the things in her hands and tears in her eyes and putted the things on the table.
Ann, “ Omg Sally, come here, tell me what’s wrong.”
Sally walked over and sat besides Anita. Ann put her arm around Sally and waited for her to answer. Sally, “ I just saw Harry with some girl, but that’s not the thing, I was very happy to see him and was smiling at him, when his girlfriend asked if he knew me and then I was about to answer, but then he said, no babe, it’s probably a fan.” Tears were streaming down her cheeks.
Ann, “ Omg what an jerk! Why the hell would he say that.”
Sally shook her had and said, “ I don’t know, but I feel so hurt and now I also broke my promise to you.”
Ann, “ aww hun, don’t worry about that, it’s not your fault, you haven‘t really broken your promise.”
Sally, “ This really sucks.”
Ann, “ I know, but let’s do something, what do you want to do?”
Sally, “ I don’t know, go down to the beach.”
Ann, “ Okay, should we ask if Jonathan and Tobchi wants to come with us?”
Sally, “ yeah.”
Ann, “ good, well go and get your bathing suit on, I’ll call the guys.”
Sally walked upstairs to change, while Anita called Tobchi and asked if they wanted to go with them and they said yes. Anita also got changed and soon they both were out of the door.

Harry had just got home from town with Andrea and was sitting on the sofa thinking about Sally. ‘ Why did I lie to Andrea, why couldn’t I just have said that she was a friend’. Danny walked in and sat besides Harry and saw that Harry was in his own world. Danny, “ yo mate, what’s up?” Harry looked up, “ nothing dude, it’s just something.” he said, so Andrea wouldn’t ask. Tom and Dougie also walked in with their gf’s and Danny’s gf. Harry, “ Ehm girls, I need to speak with the guys alone, can you please leave for like 10 min.”
They all 4 said,” sure.” and they left.
Dougie,” what’s up dude?”
Harry, “ ehm it’s probably not that important, but I saw Sally this morning in the mall.”
Danny, “ Sally Asani? As Ann friends Sally?”
Harry, “ yes”
Tom, “ are you sure you’re not dreaming.”
Harry, “ no but..” he was about to say something when Dougie cut him off.
Dougie,” Omg! Then it was Sally I saw last night, she was dancing on the dance floor with Ann.”
Danny, “ WHAT? Why didn’t you say anything?”
Dougie, “ dude I thought I was wrong and you guys wouldn’t believe me, if I told ya.”
Harry, “ I wasn’t done, may I carry on?”
Dougie, “ sure.”
Harry, “ anyways, I met her in the mall at the elevator, I was about to kiss Andrea when the doors opened and there she was, we were both in a shock and didn’t really say anything to each other, but Sally started smiling at me and Andrea asked if we knew each other and instead of telling the truth, I said that I didn’t know her and that she probably was some a fan.”
Danny, “ Omg Harry, why didn’t you tell her the truth, did Sally hear it?”
Harry, “ Yes she heard it and her smile faded right away, she looked so hurt.”
Tom, “ mate I would be hurt too, if it was me, it wasn’t nice of you.”
Harry, “ I know and I feel guilty, she probably wont talk me if I try to apologize”
Dougie, “ probably not.”
Danny, “ damn I need to see Ann now if she’s here.”
Tom, “ do you think she wants to see you?”
Danny, “ yeah I think so.”
Then Danny’s girlfriend Pernille shouted, “ guys we are going out in town, see you guys later”
Danny, “ fine * he shouted to her* so what do you guys want to do?”
Dougie,” we could go to the beach?”
Harry, “ sure why not.”
They all agreed and went upstairs to get ready and out of the door.
Danny couldn’t stop thinking about Ann, he hadn’t seen her for 2 years and she finally was here and he wanted to see her.
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uh, onde harry!

rigtig godt afsnit, sally!
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uh, onde harry!

rigtig godt afsnit, sally!
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Helt enig! Very Happy

Gad vide hvem de møder på stranden ? (;
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kom med mere snart!! xD
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Uh er lige begyndt at læse den !

Den er mega god ! Very Happy

Og ja !
Onde Harry !!! Very Happy

Mere meget snart !!
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1000 tak tøser! Så er der lige noget mere =D Very Happy


Anita, Sally, Tobchi and Jonathan had arrived at the beach and had found a place to sit. They had played some football, but it didn’t really work with all the sand.
The girls were lying on their towels sunbathing.
Jonathan shouted from the sea,” girls! Don’t be so boring and get in.”
They both laughed, Sally,” fine I’ll get in, Ann are you coming?”
Ann,” naah I’m pretty comfortable here haha”
Sally, “ haha okay.” Sally ran in to the water and stayed there splashing Jonathan with the water, while Tobchi was flirting with some other girl.
15 min had left and Sally was still in the water.
Ann was about to fall a sleep, when suddenly someone blocked her way to the sun.
Ann,” Sally get out of the way,” she said not opening her eyes.
The person laughed at her. She immediately knew, who that laugh belonged to. She opened her eyes and saw Danny standing there with a big smile and only in swimming trunks.
Ann,” Danny!! Omg! haha”
Danny,” Ann! Haha”
Ann got up quickly and Danny quickly hugged her.
Danny,” omg I haven’t seen you for a long time.” he said not letting go.
Ann,” noo * Ann pulled away* how’ve you been?”
Danny, “ I’ve been good, what about you?”
Ann, “ I’ve been good too, so what are you guys doing here? Or you all here right?”
Danny, “ yes we are haha, well we’re here in Australia to record our new album.”
Ann, “ oh a new album that sounds cool.”
Danny nodded at her while smiling and said, “ So where is Sally?”
Ann, “ ehm she’s over there * she pointed at Sally in the water with Jonathan*”
Danny looked and laughed and said, “ is that her boyfriend?”
Ann,” no it’s just a friend.”
Danny, “ aah nice and what about the other guy * he said while looking at him*”
Ann,” he’s a friend too hehe.”
Danny,” nice, * shouting* SALLY”
Sally turned around and saw Danny sitting with Ann.
Sally,” DANNY!” she said and ran out of the water to hug him.
Danny, “ arrghh don’t hug me, you’re all wet.”
Sally, “ haha you don’t have a choice” * she said and hugged him.
Danny,” arrghh you’re cold.”
Anita and Sally laughed, Sally dried herself and sat beside Ann.
Sally, “ how are you.”
Danny,” I’m good, how about you?”
Sally, “ I’m great.”
Danny,” nice, ehm I heard about your bumping in to Harry today.”
She looked at him and smiled a weak smile,” yeah I did”,
Danny,” I’m really sorry about what he said, he didn’t mean it Sal, he’s just a goose ball sometimes.”
Sally, “ yeah, probably.” There was a bit of an awkward silence.
Ann,” anyways, where are the others’?
Danny, “ oh their sitting somewhere that way” he said pointing.
Ann, “ nice hehe.”
Danny,” you girls want to come over and say hi?”
Ann, “ sure I would like to, but I don’t really about Sally.”
Sally,” well Harry’s there right?”
Danny, “ yes but don’t worry Sal he wont do anything.”
Sally, “ yeah okay, I’ve missed Tom and Dougie.”
They stood up and started walking towards the other guys.
Danny, “ hey didn’t you miss me?”
Sally,” nope haha.”
Danny pretended to be hurt.
Sally, “ I’m kidding of course.”
Danny,” good, did you miss me Ann.” he said and looked at Ann.
Ann,” of course hehe.”
Danny, “ good because I missed you.”
Ann giggled and blushed a bit.
They got to the guys seeing only Harry lying on a the chair, with his eyes closed.
Ann and Danny sat on Danny’s chair and Sally sat on the one besides Harry’s.
Harry didn’t know that it was Sally and Ann sitting there.
Danny, “ I think he’s sleeping.”
Ann, “ yeah probably.”
Harry opened his eyes to see Ann, and Sally with her back to him.
Harry, “ Omg Ann hi.”
He stood up and went over to hug Anita and then turned around to see Sally still sitting down. Harry, “ hi Sally.” he said and sat beside her.
Sally looked at him, but didn’t say anything.
Sally, “ where is Dougie and Tom?”
Harry, “ their in the sea” he answered. He didn’t want Sally to get mad at him, so he kept talking to her, when she asked questions to the others.
Sally looked out to the sea, to see Dougie and Tom trying to pull each other under the water. Sally laughed, “ omg they look so funny, I’m going in.”
Ann, “ but you didn’t bring your towel here.”
Sally,” I know, it doesn’t matter.”
Sally got up and ran in to the water and jumped on Dougie and Tom.
Harry looked hurt, he wanted to be the one in the water with Sally.
Half an hour had been going and Anita, Danny and Harry had been talking a lot and Danny had invited Ann to their concert this evening and told her to bring Sally with her. After sometime Danny’s and Harry’s girlfriend came.
Ann got a shock to see Pernille their.
Ann, “ omg.”
Pernille, “ what the hell are you doing here?” she said looking mad.
Danny, “ do you know each other?”
Ann,” yes we know each other and I’m with Danny for your information *looking at Pernille*, are you Danny’s gf?”.
Pernille, “ yes I’m.”
Ann couldn’t believe it, over all those women out there, he was with Pernille.
Danny, “ how do you two know each other?”
Pernille, “ we worked on the same place.”
Dougie, Tom and Sally came out of the water and saw Pernille and Ann looking mad each other. Then Harry’s gf Andrea said, “ hey you’re the fan from before,” the McFLY guys’ and Ann looked weirdly at her while Sally looked angry at her, she wanted to hit her. Yes Sally was a fan, but that was not how she wanted to be remembered by Harry. Harry, “ babe never mind.” Ann,” you know what, Sally let’s go, see ya tonight,” they walked off back to their place and took their things and left to go home.
Ann and Sally walked in to their flat and Sally said, “ argh I can’t believe his such an idiot!”
Ann,” I know! And I can’t believe he’s with Pernille.”
Sally, “ yeah it’s so not fair, anyways what did you mean with see you tonight?”
Ann, “ well Danny invited us to their gig today.”
Sally,” oh are we going?”
Ann,” well I really want to, but I don’t want to go backstage, cause Pernille will be there.”
Sally,” okay, well we can see the show and then go home.”
Ann, “ yeah, well let‘s eat something and then get ready.”
Sally, “ good idea.”
The girls ate and went to get ready for the show. They were looking forward to it, but
were both pissed with how the things were between them and the guys.
The girls went to the concert and had good time, the guys were very good and they played some awesome songs. The girl went straight home after the concert.
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Great, as usual Very Happy
Og Harry er da bare en idiot!! -.-

Kunne måske godt have brugt lidt mere om koncerten

Fortsæt endelig Very Happy
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Great, as usual Very Happy
Og Harry er da bare en idiot!! -.-

Kunne måske godt have brugt lidt mere om koncerten

Fortsæt endelig Very Happy
haha tak, ja jeg burde nok have skrevet mere om koncerten, men ved ikke helt hvorfor jeg ikke gik i dybten med den..
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Great, as usual Very Happy
Og Harry er da bare en idiot!! -.-

Kunne måske godt have brugt lidt mere om koncerten

Fortsæt endelig Very Happy
haha tak, ja jeg burde nok have skrevet mere om koncerten, men ved ikke helt hvorfor jeg ikke gik i dybten med den..

Hehe nej okay Smile Bare helt iorden. Glæder mig til mere! Very Happy
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det er rigtig godt Very Happy
det er så godt skrevet !!!!
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tak tak =D, jeg er glad for i synes om den.
Der kommer nok mere i morgen hvis jeg får tid..
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tak tak =D, jeg er glad for i synes om den.
Der kommer nok mere i morgen hvis jeg får tid..
og du skrev det igår, så imorgen er idag Very Happy jaaaaaa xD
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tak tak =D, jeg er glad for i synes om den.
Der kommer nok mere i morgen hvis jeg får tid..
og du skrev det igår, så imorgen er idag Very Happy jaaaaaa xD
haha ja, sorry for jeg ikke har sat noget før,
men må gøre det nu, skal til gymnasie fest i aften, så ny part:


1 week had gone and Anita and Sally had really seen the guys.
Ann was having a shower, while Sally was eating breakfast.
Ann’s mobile rang, Sally, “ ANN! You’re mobile is ringing.”
Ann, “ arrghh can’t you pick it up.”
Sally,” okay!.” Sally ran over and picked Ann’s mobile up.
Sally,” hello?”
Danny, “ hello, Ann is that you? It doesn’t sound like you.”
Sally,” it’s me Sally, your goose ball!”
Danny,” oh, have I called you?”
Sally,” haha noo, it’s Ann’s phone but she’s in the shower so I picked it up.”
Danny, “ ohh haha, anyways I wanted to ask you girls if you wanted to play football with us?”
Sally, “ how many is us?”
Danny,” Me and Harry?”
Sally,” well you probably know my answer to that.”
Danny,” aww PLEEASSE Sally, please please,” * he begged*
Sally,” alright alright, geez calm down.”
Danny,” yay, okay well meet us at the football ground near the beach, at 11 am.”
Sally,” okay, bye.”
Danny,” bye.”
Just as they hung up, Ann got out of the shower.
Ann,” who was it?”
Sally,” it was Danny, he wanted to ask if we wanted to play football with Harry and him.”
Ann,” and you said?”
Sally,” I said yes.”
Ann, “are you sure.”
Sally, “ yep, just because I’m mad at Harry doesn’t mean I can’t be around.”
Ann,” true, well I’ll get ready then.”
The girls got ready. They put some shorts on and then took their FCK t-shirts on.
They went down to the football ground, were it was asphalt.
Sally, “ omg I hope I won’t fall, or else I’m going to get very badly bruised.”
Ann, “ yeah, it doesn’t matter, we’re playing football.” * she said happily*
Danny whistled to them to come over, the girls ran over to them.
Danny, “ Okay ready? I’ll decide the teams.”
They all 3 nodded.
Danny, “ Anita and Harry and Sally and me.”
Anita, “ fair enough”.
They started playing, Ann and Harry were very good, and had 2 goals, while Sally and Danny had 0. It got very hot and the guys pulled their t-shirt of.
Sally and Anita looked at each other with big eyes.
Danny saw their expression and laughed, “ you girls mind.”
Sally,” absolutely not haha.”
Harry smiled at Sally’s comment.
They played for 2 hours, not wanting to stop.
Danny and Sally were getting good at it, it stood 7-4 to Harry and Ann.
Danny got the ball and shot it to Sally, who ran with the ball.
Harry had to cover her, but was afraid that she would be angry.
Ann,” Harry! Cover Sally!”.
Sally looked at him and ran and shot the ball in the goal.
Danny,” YES”.
Sally smiled and high fived.
Ann walked over to Harry who looked confused.
Ann,” Harry I know you’re afraid, but you have to get the ball, she wont eat ya,”
Harry nodded. Danny,” hey who sucks now huh.”
Harry, “ oh shut it, I need a break, gotta smoke .”
Sally looked weirdly at him and for the first time spoke to him, “ you smoke?”
Harry turned around to see Sally facing him, “ yes I do, why?” he said and lit up an cigarette and sat down. Sally walked over to him and sat down too.
Sally, “ well it’s not healthy.”
Harry, “ I know that, but I can’t quit.”
Ann and Danny walked to them and sat down. Ann,” of course you can quit Harry.”
Harry, “ I know, but I don’t really want to.”
Sally shook her head to tell that it was bad.
After a couple of minutes, Harry was done, but they didn’t wanted to play anymore. Danny and Ann made a deal to meet up tonight.
The girls went home and so did the guys.

It was 8pm and Ann had got herself ready, Sally had helped her with her clothes.
Ann wore a black high-waistline short skirt and had a blue top that she put in the skirt, she wore blue shoes to mach with it.
Ann went and sat beside Sally on the sofa.
Ann,” do you have any plans for tonight?”
Sally,” no not really, I think I’ll be chilling here hehe.”
Ann,” hehe okay.”
There was a knock on the door and Ann got up to get it. It was Danny, he was wearing blue chequered shirt with black jeans.
Ann,” Hi”
Danny, ” hello * they hugged*, you look very nice.”
Ann, “ aw thanks, so do you, do you want to come in or should we go.”
Danny, “ well let’s just get going.”
Sally shouted from the sofa, lazily, “ Hiii Danny.”
Danny, “ Hi Sally.”
Ann, “ Sally we’re going bye.”
Sally, “ bye have fun.”

Ann and Danny had decided that they wanted to eat, in the nice restaurant besides the beach. Danny had made a reservation for them, so they came in easily.
Danny pulled the chair out for Ann.
Ann,” thank you Danny.” she said smiling.
Danny sat opposite her and said, “ you’re welcomed.”
They started having a nice conversation, about how things had been.
Ann, “ so when are you guys’ leaving?”
Danny,” actually, we are leaving in 4 days.”
Ann,” what! Oh that’s sad, how long have you been here.”
Danny, “ we’ve been here for 2 months.”
Ann, “ woow that’s a long time.”
Danny, “ yeah, but we’ve got a good tan haha.”
Ann,” hah true, so does Pernille know that you‘re out with me.”
Danny, “ ehm not really actually.”
Ann, “ oh, she probably wouldn’t let you go, if she knew it was me you were going out with.”
Danny, “ yeah.”
There was a bit of a awkward silence between them, but it faded away, when they started another subject.

* At the apartment*
Sally was so bored, she didn’t know what to do. She decided to call Jonathan to hear, what he was up to. Calling up.
Jonathan, “ hello?”
Sally,” Hi Jonathan it’s me.”
Jonathan, “ hey Sally, what are you doing?”
Sally, “ nothing really, I’m quite bored.”
Jonathan, “ oh haha, do you want to go out?”
Sally, “ ehm yeah sure, where?”
Jonathan, “ well I was wondering if you wanted to go to the club, we were at last time.”
Sally, “ yeah sure, but I just have to get ready, give me one hour and I’ll you meet at the club.”
Jonathan, “ okay, bye.”
Sally, “ bye.”
Sally got up and ran in to her room to get ready.

* Ann and Danny*
Danny and Ann were done eating and had decided to go down to the beach.
Danny had grabbed Ann’s hand and walked with her, until their were far away from the restaurant and sat down on the sand.
There was a silence between them, they were just looking over the sea.
Ann had a lot of thoughts in her head, a lot of questions that she wanted Danny to answer, but she didn’t know how to say it. Her thoughts were disturbed by Danny saying, “ I’m very sorry Ann.” *He was still looking over the sea*.
Danny, “ I never meant to hurt you.” He said and looked at Ann.
Danny, “ I never meant to stop contacting you.”
Ann, “ I don’t really know what to say, I was very hurt.”
Danny, “ I know, it’s just that I couldn’t stop thinking about you, but when Pernille got in to my life, I knew I had to end it, because she would found out that I was in love with someone else.” Ann looked at him, how could he!
Ann got up, she was mad at him, “ so you just stopped contacting me because of Pernille.”
Danny got up and saw that Ann was angry, he grabbed her arms.
Danny, “ Ann please don’t get angry with me, you must understand.”
Ann, “ well I don’t Danny! You could at least have told me!”
Ann tried to pull away from Danny, but he wouldn’t let go.
Danny,” please listen to me.”
Ann, “ no Danny, *tears formed in her eyes* when I saw you last week kissing with Pernille, I was hurt! I was really happy to see you, but ..” She got cut of by Danny.
Danny,” you saw me last week and did come over to me!” He sounded upset.
Ann, “ what did you expect me to do? Come over and say hi while you had your tongue down her throat!”
Danny could see how upset Ann was. She was right it wouldn’t have been the best idea. Ann pulled away from Danny and started walking.
Danny, “ Ann we’re you going?”
Ann, “ home Danny.”
Danny ran after her and grabbed her by her arms again and spun her around and leaned in to kiss her. Ann was shocked, she didn’t know what to do, she kissed him back, but regretted it. Ann, “ no Danny this isn’t fair, you have a girlfriend, go back to her.” she said and turned her back to him.
Danny, “ Ann please listen to me god damn it, I love you !!” he yelled.
Ann couldn’t believe what he just said, she turned around to see him with tears in his eyes. Ann, “ I don’t believe you Danny and please don’t tell me you love me, it wont help me getting you back.”
Danny grabbed Ann and kissed her again and said, “ I mean it, I love you.”
Ann pulled away and said, “ no Danny, you shouldn’t say that! You have girlfriend.”
Danny, “ But Ann I..” Danny got cut off by Ann running away.
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NEEEJ KOM TILBAGE !!!!!!!!! DANNY DIT GRØDHOVED !!
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Jeg er helt enig ^
Danny er lidt af en spade i det her afsnit -.-

Mere snart ?
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yes så er der lige det sidste afsnit af min fic, har ikke fået skrevet mere på den,
men jeg overvejer hvad der ellers skal ske, så det er det sidste for måske lang tid:

Sally had gone out and had met Jonathan. She was wearing black knee long jeans and a blue halter neck. Jonathan and Sally walked in to the club and went over to a table to sit.
Jonathan, “ it’s nice to finally be alone with you.”
Sally, “ what?”
Jonathan, “ I mean, I’ve missed you and we haven’t really got the chance to talk alone.”
Sally, “ oh no hehe, I’ve missed you too * she lied*.”
Jonathan, “ you look very nice tonight.” he said and leaned a bit closer to Sally.
Sally didn’t really know what to do, Jonathan was about to kiss her, when suddenly she saw Harry looking at her and pulled away. Jonathan looked weirdly at her, while Sally was staring at Harry. He looked hurt, he turned around and went somewhere.
Jonathan, “ what’s wrong with you?”
Sally,” look Jonathan, I don’t have any feelings for you, ok?” she said a bit mad
Jonathan, “ oh I thought you still liked me.”
Sally, “ I’m sorry, but I don’t.”
Jonathan looked hurt and stood up, “ I’m going out to take some fresh air.”
Sally, “ But we just got in.”
Jonathan, “ yeah, but I can’t really look at you right now.” he said and walked out, leaving Sally alone. Sally was shocked and didn’t know what to do.

Ann had just got home, she had so many thoughts in her head it was killing her.
Ann had just put her jacket in the closet, when there was a knock on the door.
Ann opened the door to see Danny standing there.
Ann, “ what do you want!” she said upset.
Danny, “ you.”
He grabbed Ann and pulled her in kissing her, while slamming the door.
Ann was trying to pull him away, but he pulled her up against a wall, still kissing her.
Ann, “ Danny please, we can’t do this, no matter how much I hate Pernille, I still think it isn’t fair to cheat on someone.”
Danny, “ I know Ann, but I love you.”
Ann didn’t know what to say. Danny, “ do you love me?”
Ann looked in to his eyes, should she tell the truth.
Ann, “ I love you Danny.” she said.
Danny looked in to her eyes and smiled, he lifted her up and kissed her passionately.
Ann couldn’t fight him of anymore, she loved him too much.
He carried Ann in to her room, while kissing her. He laid her down on the bed and they both slowly took their clothes of, aaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnddddddd. Yeah you know haha, sorry for ruining the moment haha.

Sally was still at the club trying to find out, what to do. She walked over to the bar and bought a cult shaker. She sat on one of the bar chairs’ and looked over the dance floor. Sally was thinking about Harry, when suddenly someone pushed her chair so she felt and split her knee on some broken glass on the floor.
Sally, “ auuuuccch.” she yelped out in pain. Someone grabbed her by the waist and pulled her up and said, “ Sally are you alright.” Sally turned her head, to see who was holding her and saw the most perfect blue eyes she knew oh so well, Harry’s.
Sally, “ I’m alright, my knee is bleeding very badly.” Harry, “ oh shit, let’s get you out of here.” Sally,” ehm Harry it’s okay, I can do by myself.”
Harry, “ no Sally, I’ll help you, please let me.” He said, looking her in the eyes.
Sally, “ okay.”
The bartender gave Sally some plaster’s to her wound and some paper. Harry and Sally walked down to the beach and Harry helped Sally to sit down on the sand.
Harry sat opposite her and took the plasters’ and the paper and started cleaning Sally’s wound. Sally, “ auch, please be careful.” Harry, “ oh sorry.” Sally was looking at Harry, while he cleaned her wound. He looked so good, he had black jeans and a black blouse with a red chequered shirt under it. Harry looked up, to see Sally looking at him. Harry, “ what?”. Sally, “nothing.” Harry finished cleaning her wound and put the plaster on it, and gave her knee a little kiss and looked at her smiling. Sally smiled back, she couldn’t stay mad at him for to long. Harry, “ look Sally, I’m very sorry about what I said last week, I was very shocked to see you and said something wrong, but I didn‘t mean any of it.”
Sally, “ you really hurt me Harry.” she said looking at him.
Harry, “ I know, I know and I’m so so so sorry.”
Sally didn’t really know if she wanted to forgive him. Harry was looking at Sally, he really hoped that she would forgive him, he never meant to hurt her.
Harry, “ you know I love you Sally.”
Sally looked at him with big eyes and said, “ you do?”
Harry, “ yes very much.”
Sally didn’t know what to say, she was very happy, but he has a girlfriend.
Harry took Sally’s hands and pulled her over, so she sat on his lap, holding around his neck and he was holding around her waist.
Sally, “ I love you too Harry, but what about your girlfriend?”
Harry, “ she’s home, she thinks I’m out with Danny.”
Sally, “ don’t you care about her?”
Harry, “ of course I do, but Sally you’re here and I love you, and I want to be with you when I have the chance.”
Sally couldn’t agree more, why not be with him, when he’s here.
Sally leaned forward and kissed Harry on his lips, Harry was a bit shocked that she kissed him, but he kissed her back more passionately. Harry laid back on the sand with Sally. They kissed for while, when Sally pulled away, “ Harry I’m cold.”
Harry, “ oh, well let’s go then, can we go to your place?”
Sally, “ sure.” she said and grabbed Harry’s hand and walked home.
When they got home, they could see Ann and someone else shoes.
Sally, “ do you know this shoes.”
Harry, “ they look like Danny’s.”
Suddenly they heard noise’s from Ann’s room. Harry and Sally looked at each other and started laughing. Sally, “ argh gross.”
Harry, “ haha yeah.”
Sally grabbed his hand and dragged him in to her room, where they started kissing. Harry lifted Sally and laid her on the bed. They took their clothes of annnnnnnnnnnddddd. Yeah, I leave that to my own imagination =P haha

The next day, the boys got up before the girls and sat eating breakfast together.
Harry, “ so are you going to tell Pernille?”
Danny, “ no, this is between us, so please don’t say anything.”
Harry, “ no I wont, but promise me you wont say anything to Andrea.”
Danny, “ no, have you told Sally that we’re leaving in 3 day’s?”
Harry, “ no, but I tell her today, I want to spend the last days with her.”
Danny, “ me too, just with Ann.”
Harry, “ anyways I’m going in to wake Sally, I want to go to town with her.”
Danny, “ okay, I think I’ll be chilling here with Ann.”
Harry got up and went in to Sally’s bedroom, to wake Sally up.

3 day’s had passed and the guys had said their goodbyes to Sally and Anita.
Harry had given Sally a boomerang to remember him by, and to remember that, when ever they meet again, they will get back to each other.
Ann and Danny had made their promises that Ann would come and visit Danny soon in London.

Will the girls meet them again? Will Harry and Sally keep their promises? Will Ann visit Danny? You’ll have to find out, next time.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Virkelig godt hehe
glæder mig til mere selv om der er lang lang lang tid til Very Happy
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Loving it, Sally! Very Happy

Bare tag dig god til med det næste, men ikke for lang tid for jeg er utålmodig Razz
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Det er rigtig godt Very Happy
mere snart..
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Så synes jeg lige i skulle have noget nyt fra min fic igen! Please giv mig kommentar!! Og efter i har læst det, så læst også Anita's fic, den er for fed! Og giv hende noget repons på den.


It’s been 4 months, since Sally and Anita saw the guys. Anita and Danny had kept the contact, but had remained as friends, because Danny was still together with Pernille. Danny hadn’t told Pernille, about keeping contact with Anita, so he kept it as a secret. Sally and Harry hadn’t talked much to each other, but Sally had heard from Anita, that Harry was together with Andrea. It was August and Sally and Anita had bought, a flat in London. Sally had gotten in to a journalist university in London, and had gotten a job in Starbucks as a part-time job. Anita on the other way, had gotten in to a college where, she was going to study ICM International Communication and Multi-Media, and had gotten a job in virgin mega store, as a part-time job. Anita hadn’t told Danny about, them moving to London, because she wanted it, to be a surprise. The girls were walking around in flat, doing the final touches.
Sally was cleaning up the bathroom, while Ann was putting the DVDs on their places.
Sally: So when are you planning on, telling Danny that you’re here?
Ann: I don’t know, I was thinking if we could visit Danny later on?
Sally: Sure, but shouldn’t you call him first, it’s just so we don’t get there, and then he wont be there.
Anita: yeah, but I want to surprise him, * She was thinking for a moment and then said* maybe I should call Dougie and ask him, he lives there too, and then I could tell him to keep it quiet.
Sally: Yeah that would be good, you do that now, and I’ll put the rest of the dvds on the shelf.
Anita walked in to her room, and called Dougie ..
Dougie: Hello?
Anita: Hello it’s Anita.
Dougie: Ann!! How are you?
Ann: I’m good thanks, how are you?
Dougie: I’m very good, just chilling, so what’s up?
Ann: Well to be honest I’m in London!
Dougie: Omg really! Where are you staying?
Ann: Well actually, Sally and I have moved here, we have a flat.
Dougie: Really? That’s cool, why haven’t you said anything before?
Ann: Well I wanted it to be surprise, so please don’t tell Danny, but Sally and I wanted to come over and visit, if Danny’s there.
Dougie: Oh yeah his upstairs.
Ann: Good, but don’t tell him, that I‘m coming over.
Dougie: No I wont, well see you soon, bye.
Ann: Bye!
And they hung up.
Ann walked in and saw that Sally had finished. Sally saw that Anita, had gotten out of her room.
Sally: So?
Anita: He’s home, so I guess we should get going?
Sally: Yeah good idea.
They locked their flat, and walked down, the mcfly boys weren’t living far away from them, so they walked.
The girls arrived, at Dougie and Danny’s apartment. Anita rang on the bell to Dougie’s, so he could open instead of Danny. Dougie opened the door, and hugged the girls. Then they walked upstairs to Danny’s flat, where Dougie knocked on the door. Danny opened the door lazily, but jumped when he saw Ann and Sally.
Danny: Omg Ann!!
He quickly pulled Ann into him and hugged her for very long.
Sally: Ahmmem.
Danny: Oh sorry Sally.
Sally laughed and hugged Danny. They went into Danny’s living room, and sat down.
Danny: When did you girl get here?
Sally: From one week ago probably.
Danny: One week ago, and you haven’t told me. *Danny looked at Anita*
Anita: Sorry Danny, I just wanted it to be a surprise.
Danny: Well it sure it a surprise * he laughed* So what are you girls doing here.
Sally: Well we basically live here.
Danny looked confused and then opened his eyes wide.
Danny: YOU LIVE HERE?
Anita: Yes, Sally and I moved her from a week ago.
Danny: Omg that’s so great!
Dougie: Yeah it is, but you girls’ should had said something, so we could help with the moving.
Sally: Yeah, but Ann and I handled it very well, anyways I was wondering, where's Harry.
Dougie: I think he's at home, should I call him and tell him to come.
Sally: Yeah, that could be great.
Dougie and Danny smiled and Dougie walked out of the living room, to call Harry.
5 min later, Dougie walked in again.
Dougie: He’s coming, but I haven’t told him, that you girls are here.
Sally: okay, that’s good anyways, Danny I saw that you have a ring on your finger, never seen that one.
They all looked at Danny’s finger.
Danny: Oh yeah, I haven’t had a ring for sometime, so I wanted a ring, so I bought this.
Anita: Oh cool, it looks nice.
Danny: Yeah * Danny looked at Dougie weirdly*
Then there was a knock on the door, Danny got up and answered it, to see Harry standing there.
Danny: Hi mate * hugged him* come on in.
Harry: Thanks dude.
Harry and Danny walked in to the living room, and Harry saw the girls.
Harry: Omg Sally! Ann!!
The girls were laughing. Harry sort of ran, over to them and hugged them both.
Harry: What are you girls doing here?
Sally: Well we’ve moved here.
Harry: So you girls, live in London.
Sally and Ann nodded.
Harry: Oh that’s so great.
Danny: So how come that you girls have moved here.
Anita: Well Sally and I found some schools. I'm studying ICM, which is International Communication and Multi-Media and Sally’s got into a university for journalism. Plus we’ve got some jobs, so we can earn some money.
Dougie: Well that sounds good girls, you really want to be journalist Sally?
Sally: Yeah, I think it sounds cool, especially for magazines, I want to work for some, youth magazines.
Dougie: cool, maybe one day, you’ll get to interview us.
Sally: hopefully * she laughed*
Harry: So have you girls been out in town?
Anita: No not yet, we’ve just finished decorating our flat.
Danny: Aww, well you girls should be having a fun night out, like a first night out in London since you moved.
Anita: Yeah that could be good.
Harry: Yeah, so let’s say tomorrow night, we’ll go out and party.
Sally: Sounds great to me.
Anita: Yeah.
Danny: Well then it’s settled.
Anita: So is it only us or?
Danny looked at Harry and Dougie, and then said: Only the 6 of us.
Anita: Good, so what time?
Harry: Let’s say at 6 pm, then we can have some dinner, and then to some club.
Sally: Yeah that sounds good.
Dougie: Good, it will be fun.
The girls stayed at Danny a bit more, and then left.
Harry, Dougie and Danny went back to the living room. Harry looked at Danny and said: So, I guess you haven’t told her? Or them?
Danny: No mate, so please don’t mention anything, I will tell her when the time is right.
Harry nodded and then left.
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Jeg elsker din fic Sally hehe...Smile
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Ahaha, elsker den her Very Happy
Årh nej, hvad er det Danny ikke har fortalt?!
Er han forlovet eller gift?! please sig nej ..

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