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Det ville være deeeeeeerjligt,
siden jeg skal være hjemme hele dagen,
så har jeg også noget at læse Razz
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er du syg eller hvad?
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Nej, min uu-vejleder er bare en idiot,
det hele står under 'få det ud' nu. har lige skrevet det..
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Anita, I'm so sorry .. -.-
Læste dine sidste afsnit i skolen, men fik aldrig kommenterer på dem, so here it goes:

I LOVE IT!!! Very Happy
Harry og Sally er så søde, og Dougie med popcornene, classic Razz
Tror altså også der er noget mystisk med hende Stephanie -.- Vi må jo lige finde ud af hvad det er så (;

Mere, snart ? Very Happy
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Haha det er helt iorden, men er glad for at i ka li det Very Happy
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ok i får lige næste del her...

+Back with Anita+
Anita: God I’m so BORED and there’s nothing on telly, and now I’m talking to myself… GREAT!!
She picked up her phone and called Danny

+At the guys’ place+
Danny and Tom were sitting in the living room watching telly
Danny: So you and Stephanie huh?
Tom: Yeah it’s gonna be great seeing her again
Danny: who asked? Did you or?
Tom: She did…
Danny: *he was really confused now and said* ok, but…
He was cut off by his phone ringing he picked it up and said
Danny: Hello?
Anita: Hey honey it’s me
Danny: hey Babe, what’s up?
Anita: I am sooo bored I don’t know what to do?
Danny: Haha I’m sorry to hear that… what are we gonna do about that then?
Anita: Do you think Tom would mind me coming around?
Danny: Haha I knew you were gonna ask me that… but just a sec I’ll ask Tom *turns to Tom* Tom is it ok if Anita comes around here cos she’s bored and misses me
Anita: I didn’t say that Danny
Danny: Yeah Ann you do I can tell, deep inside you Ann… you miss me
Tom: *laughs cos he heard what she said* of course it’s ok…
Danny: ok… *turns back to Anita* you can come around, be careful when you go out and I’ll see you in 10 minutes…
Anita: no 15 bye…
Danny: Haha whatever you say babe.. bye *he then hung up*



+back with Anita+
She was going around getting ready. She quickly brushed her hair, found her keys, wallet and phone and put them in a bag then got out of the house and drove to the guys’ place.
As she came to their house she knocked on the door, then she heard Danny say
Danny: The door is open…
She walked in and took off her jacket, then she went into the living room…
Anita: Hey Tom *she said and ruffled his hair as she passed him*
Tom: Hey Ann
Anita: *she then went over to Danny* Hey babe *she said and kissed him and sat down beside him*
Danny: Hey… *he said and kissed her again* you know what? Tom’s got a date
Anita: Really? *she said and looked over at Tom*
Tom: Yeah with Stephanie..
Anita: oh that’s great Tom… When are you going on a date then?
Tom: Saturday night
Anita: Cool
They kept talking for a while, and then started watching a movie.

+back with Sally and Harry+
They had just finished eating and Sally said
Sally: wow this was really great Harry, we need to go here some other time again…
Harry: yeah that’d be great… should we go now then?
Sally: yeah… let’s do that…
Harry: should we go to a pub to get a drink or should we just head back home?
Sally: hmm let’s go to the pub first
Harry: ok… then they went out of the restaurant and down to a nearby pub.
Inside the pub… they went up to the barman
Harry: hey can I order some drinks?
Barman: yeah what would you like?
Harry: a beer and *turning his attention to Sally* what would you like?
Sally: Sexy lady drink
Harry: you heard what she said
Seconds later they had got their drinks and they started talking.


+back with Dougie and Anne+
The movie had just finished and as they came out Dougie asked
Dougie: should we just head home or do you wanna go somewhere else?
Anne: Nah, I’m pretty tired actually if it’s ok with you?
Dougie: course it is…
Anne: but should we go back to mine? I think Anita is a bit bored?
Dougie: sure…
As they came back at their flat and saw that Anita wasn’t even home Anne called Anita to check where she was, Anita told her and she hung up.
Anne: she’s at yours of course hehe..
Dougie: ok hehe, should have known she would go there…
Anne: yeah…
Then Dougie started kissing Anne and it got more passionate by the second, then Dougie carried her upstairs to her room and I’m not going into details here…;P

+Harry and Sally+
They soon finished their drinks and headed back home, and they went to the guys place… when they came inside they shouted hey to the other guys and went to the living room
Anita: heey had a good date?
Sally: yeah it was great
Danny: wow Sally you look great in that dress..
Sally: thank you *she said and blushed* So Ann what are you doing here then?
Anita: aren’t I allowed? *she asked stupidly*
Sally: What? Yes of course, but I thought you were back home, cos you said you didn’t wanna go anywhere tonight
Anita: yeah I know, but I was bored as hell…
Danny: yeah and she missed me, lol
Anita: you wish Danny
Danny: yeah cos I missed you…
Anita: aww I knew it had something to do with that *she laughed and then kissed him* but yeah I guess I missed you a bit too…
Harry: but I think we’re going to bed now cos we’re pretty tired so we’ll talk to ya tomorrow, and I guess that we’re going to the studio to talk to Fletch don’t you think?
Tom: Yeah I think so too, cos I gotta know what to do now that I can’t really play anything…
Harry: exactly… but night guys and girl..
Anita, Danny, Tom: night..

+inside Harry’s bedroom+
Harry: it’s been really nice tonight Sally..
Sally: Yeah it has… we should do that more often…
Harry: yeah…
Sally: hmm I was wondering when do you have to go to work tomorrow?
Harry: when we’re awake, you know Fletch doesn’t know about us coming yet so we’d just call when we’re ready…
Sally: oh ok…
Soon enough they started kissing… aaaannnd I’ll leave you to the details, lol


+in Danny’s room+
They finally went to bed and they just lay talking for a while…
Danny: I have something to talk to you about…
Anita: what is it honey? Is it something to do with me? *she said getting a bit worried*
Danny: No!! of course not… no I love you, you know… it’s just eh today when we were picking up Tom I got in to the room and then the nurse suddenly started sending me flirty looks… and I got a bit uncomfortable you know, cos she knew that I already have a girlfriend, and I knew that she has been flirting with Tom…
Anita: she did what? *she said starting to get angry* I’m gonna kill her
Danny: No… she’s not worth it, and Tom likes her…
Anita: Yeah but she obviously doesn’t like him.. and I don’t want her to mess things up…
Danny: I know, and she won’t, and I think we should try and let Tom go on that date and see what happens; it was her who asked him out after all…
Anita: Yeah but still..
Danny: Ann let’s just wait and see what happens ok…
Anita: ok, but if she does something to break us up I’m seriously gonna kill her…
Danny: Yeah, Yeah but she won’t cos I don’t want her to come between us… *he said and kissed her* I love you too much to let her do that…
Anita: ok then… *she said and cuddled up to him*
Soon after Anita fell asleep and Danny lay watching her sleep for a while until he fell asleep himself.


Der vil gå lidt tid før der kommer mere, for ska lige ha rettet i den, fordi dengang vi skrev den synes vi det ku være sjovt at prøve at skrive på hinandens, og så Michelle har skrevet nu, men det passer bare ikk ind og gir ikk ret meget mening i forhold til hva der lige er sket, så er lidt nødt til at lave lidt om på det før i får lov at læse videre.... håber i ka bære over med mig Razz
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Uh, hvor er det godt Very Happy
Glæder mig til mere ..
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Selvfølgelig!
det er rigtig godt!
elsker det! xD
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har først lige fået læst de sidste 3 afsnit nu :P
JEG ELSKER DET ANITA ;D
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hehe tak Allesammen:D
dejligt med lidt respons...
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Til alle jer dejlige læsere er næste del klar nu, det har været lidt svært at skrive og få det til at fylde, da det ska passe ind med det Sally har skrevet... hun har nemlig også været en dygtig kreatør i den her fic, ska nok sige når hendes del kommer hehe Razz Men det havde jeg nemlig ikk tænkt mig at ændre på da Sally skrev det godt og havde forstået konceptet og handlingen i min fic, mere end hva man ka sige om Michelle Rolling Eyes
Nå anyways.... here goes...

The next morning the guys had all woken up and were walking around downstairs in their kitchen, all the girls were still asleep, then Danny said
Danny: Maybe we should just go see Fletch after breakfast, then we’ll have more time with the girls later on?
Harry: For once Danny I actually agree with you… we just need to call Dougie, to see if he’s up for it.
Tom: Yeah I think it’s a great idea too. I’ll just call Doug.
Then they all left to get ready in Harry’s room he went to his bathroom and changed into his clothes, which consisted a pair of jeans and a black t-shirt, he didn’t feel like doing his hair, so he just wore a cap, then he went back to the room to see Sally lying on the bed fast asleep he quickly kissed her forehead not wanting to wake her up and then went out of the room and went to the living room.
Danny too were getting ready he wore a pair of jeans with a black an white striped t-shirt and one of his hats, and when he was done getting ready he went over to the bed and kissed Anita’s cheek she woke up slightly and said
Anita: Morning… *sleepily, not even opening her eyes*
Danny: *smiled* morning, just go back to sleep, we’re going to see Fletch now ok..!
Anita: Oh, *she opened her eyes to look at Danny* I’m going to miss you when you’re gone
Danny: Yeah me too, but I gotta go now, bye sweetie *he kissed her*
Then he got off the bed and went to the living room and waited for Tom, who had just called Dougie, and came out of his room wearing a pair of black jeans, and a Ninja Turtle t-shirt and said
Tom: Come on, let’s go, we’re picking up Doug on the way.
Then Harry and Danny both got up and then they went down to the car and got in

+At the girls place+
Dougie had just woken up and went to the bathroom to get dressed; he wore his usual ¾ length jeans and an orange Hurley T-shirt. Then he wrote a note to Anne and laid it on the pillow next to her and kissed her forehead, before going out. Then he heard Tom’s car turn up in the drive way and went out of the apartment and the guys went to the studio and called Fletch to let him know they had to talk to him.

Back at the girls apartment Anita couldn’t sleep again so she got up and had a shower, then after she went to get dressed, she took on a pair of jeans and white top, and a black blouse over it. Then she went downstairs quietly and started to make some breakfast. The smell of roasted bread and scrambled eggs and bacon woke Sally up and she went to the kitchen and saw Anita there and said
Sally: Morning, do you know where Harry is?
Anita: Yeah, the guys left 30 minutes ago to talk to Fletch…
Sally: Oh, mmm it smells good here…
Anita: I know… I made something for you as well…
She said just as she was finished cooking
Anita: Could you find some plates and stuff…
Sally: Yeah sure *she said and found what they needed*
Anita put the pan on the table and got the bread into a small basket and put it on the table as well
Anita: Do you want juice?
Sally: Yeah orange juice if they have that?
Anita: Sure, *she said and got some orange and apple juice out of the fridge and sat down.* So how was your date last night…
Sally: It was great… I loved everything about it…
Anita: Well that’s great then *she said and smiled*
Sally: Yeah
Just then Anne got through the door and went to the kitchen
Anne: Hey girls, how are you this morning?
Anita: I’m great… you?
Sally: I’m alright you?
Anne: I’m happy, cos Dougie’s so nice and he gave me a new key to the guys’ apartment…
Sally: Cool… did you have a great date last night…?
Anne: Yeah… I did… did you? *Sally nodded*
Sally: *then Sally got a text from Harry and she read it* Ehm, I’m just gonna go and call Harry…
Anita: Ok tell him to tell Danny I said hi ok…
Sally: Sure… *then she dialled his number and went to the living room to talk*
Harry: *picked up the phone and said* Morning babe…
Sally: Morning handsome… so what’s up?
Harry: Not much, just missing ya…
Sally: Aww I miss you too… had a great time last night
Harry: Yeah… me too… so what have you been up to this morning?
Sally: well I just had breakfast, what did you find out so far…?
Harry: Not much, cos Fletch only just got here, so I’m gonna go again, sorry, but I’ll see you later then alright…
Sally: Sure… bye, btw. Anita told me to make you say hi to Danny from her…
Harry: ok… sure… well I’m gonna go bye..
Sally: Bye…
Then they both hung up the phone and soon after Anna and Anita came to the living room and Anna said
Anne: So do you wanna go shopping?
Sally and Anita at the same time: Yeah I’d love to…
Anne: *laughed* great then…
Then the 3 girls went out of the apartment and downtown shopping
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Meeereee? Very Happy
Det er super godt! Razz
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poster måske næste del senere, men jeg ska lige ned i byen og købe lidt ind først...
Men så ka det jo også være der har været mere respons til den tid:)
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A-n-i-t-a skrev:
poster måske næste del senere, men jeg ska lige ned i byen og købe lidt ind først...
Men så ka det jo også være der har været mere respons til den tid:)

Ja, det ved man jo aldrig Very Happy
Så kan jeg lige nå at gøre min NV-rapport færdig osv. Så er jeg klar til at læse videre, hah Razz
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hehe ok... den næste del blir postet lige om lidt...
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her er næste del Very Happy

+Later that day+
The girls had just got back from shopping, when the guys walked through the door and they all greeted the girls with a kiss, except Tom….
Anita: So what did you guys find out…
Tom: Well since I can’t play we’re having a break from performing and stuff, but only for a few weeks, then we’d start working on the comic relief single again, and then we have to start on our next album…
Anita: Well that’s great then… did you plan anything about a tour as well?
Danny: Only that we’re going on tour in the autumn…
Sally: Cool…
Then they all started watching TV!
Dougie: So what did you girls do today?
Anne: We went shopping…
Dougie: Cool did you buy anything?
Anne: Yeah I bought new clothes, and a new DVD…
Dougie: cool which one?
Anne: Just a girly movie, so it’s for when you’re busy at the studio and us girls gets bored… *she said with a smile*
Dougie: Oh ok… did you get me anything?
Anne: Actually yeah… *then she got up and went to Dougie’s room and soon got back* I bought you a pack of chocolate…
Dougie: Yay thanks…
Danny: Anita why didn’t you get me that as well…
Anita: well what made you think I didn’t? I just didn’t get you as much as Dougie cos I know what chocolate normally do to you *she giggled*
Danny: What… where is it?
Anita: It’s in your room, but we have to share…
Danny: Why?
Anita: Cos I want it too…
Danny: Ok… *then he went to his room and looked through the stuff she’d thrown on the bed, and found it in her purse* finally…
As he came back to the living room he sat down beside Anita and she said
Anita: That took you a while…
Danny: *laughed* Well you could have said where you left it…
Anita: Sorry *she smiled and kissed him*
Then they started eating the chocolate while watching the TV, Sally looked over at Tom and saw Tom not watching the TV but just staring into space then she said
Sally: Tom What’s wrong?
Tom: Well I’m just nervous about tonight…
Anne: Don’t be I’m sure she’ll like you…
Tom: You think?
Anne: Yeah you’re a great guy Tom…
Sally: Yeah you could get almost whoever you want…
Tom: Well that’s not true…
Anne: aww come on Tom,
Tom: Well then they only want me for the fame…
Anne: I don’t think so…
They kept talking about that for a while.
Then suddenly Anita got up from the couch, cos she had a bad feeling about it all, and went to Danny’s room, he soon followed her and said
Danny: Babe what’s up?
Anita: It’s nothing really, it’s just cos I can’t help feeling sorry for Tom, I know that maybe she really does have feelings for Tom, but what if she don’t, I can’t let him go through that pain!
Danny: Sweetie we talked about this last night, let’s just let them go on that date tonight, then Tom would probably see if she likes him or not, don’t you think?
Anita: I Don’t know… ok maybe, but could we at least warn him about it then?
Danny: Yeah I could do that, then he knows that something might be up!
Anita: Yeah… good idea…
Danny: Yeah I know *he kissed her and they got up and went back to the living room*
Sally: What did you talk about…
Anita: Nothing special… I just had to talk to Danny alone…
Sally: Well that’s needed sometimes…
Anita: Yeah exactly…
They kept watching telly for a while until Tom got up and left to get ready
Tom: I’m gonna go and get ready now…
Then Tom went to his room and Anita gave Danny a look as if to tell him to talk to him now, he nodded and stood up and left for Tom’s room.
Danny: Can I come in for a while?
Tom: Sure what’s up? *he said as he opened his wardrobe to find the clothes he wanted to wear*
Danny: Well I don’t really know how to tell you this? But yesterday when I picked you up, it was kind of like Stephanie started to send me these really flirty looks, maybe it’s just me I don’t know, but I just thought you should know about it…
Tom: Oh… well thanks for telling me… and I’ll see if there’s anything weird about it all alright…
Danny: Yeah sure… I hope you are gonna get a great date though…
Tom: Thanks me too…

Then Tom started to get ready and had found the clothes he wanted to wear. He’d decided to wear a pair of jeans, a black shirt and a white tie. He was really getting nervous and was thinking about what Danny said, what if he was right, what if she really didn’t like him at all, and it was all a big trick, but he was sure that if it was, he’d be able to tell… by now he was almost ready and he went out of his room and asked the girls…
Tom: Would this be alright for a first date with a girl? *they all 3 looked up at him and smiled*
Sally: Of course… you look great…
Anne: Yeah Tom you really do….
Tom: Thanks that means a lot to me, so I think I’m going now… byee guys
Everyone: Byee…


Det næste de næste par gange der blir postet er det Sally der har skrevet det... men hva synes i?
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Det er super godt Very Happy - Glæder mig til at læse Sally's afsnit Smile
Men men, hende Stephanie virker lidt .. hm, 'fake?' Tror hvert fald ikke hun 'bare' kan lide Tom, there's something more to it -.-
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Det var rigtig GODT Anita.. Meget meget bedre end Michelle's part.
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Anne skrev:
Det er super godt :D - Glæder mig til at læse Sally's afsnit :)
Men men, hende Stephanie virker lidt .. hm, 'fake?' Tror hvert fald ikke hun 'bare' kan lide Tom, there's something more to it -.-
ja stephanie virker rigtig træls :s
HVIS hun gør Tom noget, JEG SMADRE HENDES FACE !!!
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jaah det blir spændende at se hva:P
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eh hvor er i priviligerede idag... jeg poster på begge mine fics hehe Razz
Anyways her er næste del... husk det er Sally der har skrevet her:)

Tom and Stephanie got in to Toms blue mini cooper, and drove.
Tom: So it´s nice to see you again, and you look gorgeous by the way (Smiling)
Stephanie: (Smiling) Aww, thank you, you are so nice, you look good too, and yes it is nice to see you again. So where are we going?
Tom: Well I planned that we should go out to the cinema and watch a movie, and then go and eat some dinner in a good restaurant.
Stephanie: aww that´s sound very nice, but which movie are we going to watch?
Tom: Well, that´s up too you my lady..
Stephanie: aww, you are so sweet (giving a kiss on the cheek), I think I want to watch Fun With Dick and Jane.
Tom: Good choise, I wanted to watch that movie too.
Stephani: (laughs a bit) Then I am good of reading minds.
Tom: (Laughs) Yep!
They arrived at the cinema and got in, Tom bought the tickets, and they bought some popcorns and Cola light too, and went in to watch the movie.

+ Back to the others+
Anita: god I am getting tired, I think I am going to bed, are you coming too Danny?
Danny: Sure babe, like I would leave you to sleep alone.
Anita: Awww, hehe you are so sweet, well come on then. Night Guys,
Danny: Night guys,
The others: Night.
Anne: I think I am going too, Doug are you coming too babe?
Dougie: Jep!
Anne: Well okay then, night you two.
Dougie: Night.
Harry: Night dudes.
Sally: Night.
And they went up too sleep, Harry and Sally stayed up a bit longer and then went to sleep too.

+Back to Tom and Stephanie+
They got out of the cinema, and went too eat some food.
Tom: God, I am starving, and just ate popcorns.
Stephanie: hehe, Well then let us eat then.
They ordered. They ate and had a good time together, and then Tom drove Stephanie home.
At Stephanie’s house.
Stephanie: Well Tom, it was nice hanging out with you tonight.
Tom: Yes it was, I would love to go out with you again.
Stephanie: I will love to do it again too.
Tom got closer to her face and they kissed. Then they pulled away.
Stephanie: Bye Tom, and good night, and drive safely
Tom: Thank you honey, I will, night..
And he drove home, and got up too his room and fell asleep dreaming about Stephanie.




A long time was gone and there was only 5 days before Christmas and 4 days to Harry’s birthday, but they planed holding Harry’s birthday same day like Christmas, so they would hold Harry’s birthday the 24 Dec. They all have planed too spend Christmas at the boy’s house, so they had slept there for the week. Tom had invited Stephanie too, which Danny and Anita wasn’t really happy about that meant that Stephanie was sleeping there too, but she hadn’t made anything stupid which was good.

It was early in the morning over at the boy’s house.
Anita was having a bad dream about wasps attacking her.
She was moving her arms around in the air, Danny woke up by this and saw what Anita was doing.
Danny: Babe, wake up babe, wake up?
Anita got up quickly and sat up, very scared.
Danny: babe what was it? Were you having a nightmare?
Anita: (Scared) Yes, I dreamed that I got attacked from a lot of wasps..
Danny: Aww babe, you don’t like them neither? (Laughing a bit)
Anita: (Laughing to) No, I hate them! I don’t like them, I am afraid of them.
Danny: Oh babe, come here (pulls Anita into him), I will never let them hurt you.
Anita: You won’t?
Danny: No never!
Danny looks Anita deep into her eyes, and starts kissing her, he then tries to pull her PJ top of, but Anita pulls away.
Anita: I am sorry Danny, I am just not ready yet.
Danny: It’s okay babe, I won’t push you too it.
Anita: Thanks babe, but I have to get now, because I can’t sleep.
Danny: Okay babe, I will still be here, see if I can sleep again, and it’s only 6 am.
Anita: Yes I know, just can’t sleep anymore, sleep well babe.
Anita went and got a shower and then headed down stairs to make breakfast.

Anne woke up too, from the noise of Anita walking down stairs.
She didn´t wake Dougie up, she just kissed him on the forehead, and got into the shower and then got down see Anita in the kitchen making breakfast.
Sally woke up too from the noise, and kissed Harry on the forehead, and did the same like the two others, and went down too see Anita and Anne early up.
Sally: Good morning what´s up?
Anne: morning, I don´t know, I just got down from hearing some one walk down stairs.
Sally: Me too.
Anita: Morning to you two. I just couldn’t sleep anymore.
Anne: Why?
Anita: I just had a bad dream.
Sally: About?
Anita: About wasps attacking me, and I was woken up by Danny.
Anne: Wasps? haha okay, they actually don´t do anything.
Sally: Ohh yes, they’re evil, and they hurt one.
Anne: No they don´t, only if you do something to them.
Anita: Yes I know, but still.
Anne: yeah yeah whatever. Next subject, ehm should we go out buying presents?
Anita: It could be a good idea.
Sally: No I think we should go out with our bfs, because I don´t really want to tell what I am going to buy to you girls,.
Anne: Good idea, then we can go out tomorrow to buy presents to Harry together.
Anita: Yeah that would be a cool idea.
They talked for a while until Stephanie got down.
Stephani: Good morning.
The 3 others: Morning.
She sat beside Anne.
After a while the boys got down.
Dougie, Danny, Tom and Harry: Morning.
All 4 still sleepy.
The girls: Morning.
Dougie went over and sat beside Annes other side
Harry beside Sally, Danny beside Anita and Tom beside Stephanie...
Dougie: Good morning babe, (kissing her) why didn’t you tell me you got up?
Anne: (Kissing Dougie) Well I didn´t want to wake you up, you looked so sweet. Very Happy
Dougie: Oh haha, okay. (kissing her again).
Harry: Hi babe, (Kissing her), why did you leave without telling.
Sally: Hunny, I only went down stairs, I got up cos I heard that there was someone walking downstairs. So I didn´t want to wake you because you looked so sweet sleeping. (Kissing him)
Harry: mm, okay, do you wan´t to go out today?
Sally: Yes, we can go out buying present´s.
Harry: Oh, why did I have to ask. Okay..
They all laughed.
Anita: Well Harry you’re not the only one who is going to town today. (Looking at Danny)
Danny: (Looking at Anita and then at Harry) You are dead mate!
They all laughed,
Anne: Chill dude, you two are not the only ones, Dougie is going out with me too.
Dougie: Harry I really want to kill you now dude.
Sally: Haha chill out dudes, we actually planed going out before you guys got up.
Harry, Dougie and Danny: Oh..
Tom: (Laughed) Poor you guys!
Stephanie: And poor you too, you going out with me too.
Tom: Ohh damn it!.
They all laughed.
They all ate their breakfast, and they all went out too buy Christmas presents.
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Suuuuper Razz

Mere ? XD
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Det er godt nok længe siden har jeg har skrevet det haha.
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haha ! kunne ikke lade være med at le over det sidste :P
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nej det er et ret sjovt kapitel hahah....
men tak for kommentarerne hehe... det er helt sjovt at læse det hele igen...


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