I'll Never Leave You s/a

Emne: I'll Never Leave You s/a Ons Dec 03, 2008 12:21 am

I'll Never Leave You
Nobody ever cared.
Only you did.
Nobody ever listened.
Only you did.
Nobody ever loved me.
Only you did.
Nobody ever looked me in the eyes.
Only Harry did.

You said you loved me. You said you would never leave me.

“I’ll never leave you,”
We were lying on the green summer grass, looking up at the blue sky. Only the sun was showing. It warmed my body. But the words you had said warmed me more than any sun would ever warm.
“I know,” I smiled. I didn’t need to say that I wouldn’t leave him. He already knew.
You sat up quickly looking down at me. You smiled and gave me a soft, warm kiss.
A kiss I would never forget.
“Marry me,” you said.

It would’ve been our 2 years anniversary.
But you couldn’t keep your promise about not leaving me.
How could you?

At first I was sad and I didn’t know what to do with myself. With my life.
Now, exactly 2 years later, I’m disappointed.
Disappointed in you.
You were my only one.
The only one I had ever trusted.
The only one I would ever trust.
But you left me here, all by myself.

I was sitting on the couch, waiting for you to get home, like I always did.
It was late. You promised me that you’d be home at 12.
Another promise you couldn’t keep.
The phone rang. Who would call in the middle of the night?
I walked slowly and answered the phone with a tired and hoarse voice.
It was Tom. Your best friend of all times.
His voice cracked and suddenly he burst out crying.
“You.. have to come to the hospital. It’s Harry.”
I couldn’t believe what was happening.
The room was getting smaller and darker, and I collapsed on the floor.
At some point I knew what was going on.
I knew something was wrong.
I don’t know for how long I was lying there,
it could’ve been hours, days, weeks. I didn't care.
Finally I got up, and I ran out to the car whilst I thought of what possible could've happened.
I drove as fast as I could to get to the hospital.
But I was too late.
There was nothing the doctors could do to save you.

It was the first time I visited your grave since the day you passed away.
People said it would be good if I did.
They said it would help me.
But I wasn’t ready.

Someone lay a hand on my shoulder.
“Come on, let’s go. You’ve been standing here for a long time now,” Tom said.
He was right.
I was getting cold, but the memory of the warm summer day and the words you said warmed me up from the inside.
I nodded.
We walked slowly back to his car.
I looked back at your grave and a weak smile appeared on my lips.
“I’ll never leave you”

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Ons Dec 03, 2008 12:26 am

åh ha! hvor er den god! Lige så en der triller en tåre ned af min kind Very Happy

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Ons Dec 03, 2008 4:12 pm

Jeg er helt enig med Line, det er vildt godt Very Happy

Du var lige ved at få mig til at græde også, -.-

Bliv endelig ved!

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Ons Dec 03, 2008 7:50 pm

Super god, men supers sørgelig! s: love it

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Ons Dec 03, 2008 11:05 pm

jeg sidder med en klump i halsen !
det er virkelig smukt !

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Ons Dec 03, 2008 11:42 pm

tusind tak alle sammen!
jeg er virkelig glad for at i kan lide det.
var rimelig nervøs over at sætte det ind.

- igen, tusind tak!

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Ons Dec 03, 2008 11:45 pm

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Tors Dec 04, 2008 12:24 am

omg!! Jeg sidder faktisk med tåre i øjne nu! shit Crying or Very sad

Den er SMADER SMADER god!! Og virkelig virkelig sørgelig!!
Keep up the good work!

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Lør Dec 06, 2008 4:44 pm

Du skulle da overhovedet ikke være nervøs for at sætte den herind! Den er bare helt fantastisk god!! og sørgelig
Be proud!

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Lør Dec 06, 2008 11:31 pm

Wauw...

Jeg er målløs !
Jeg har seriøst tårer i øjnene lige nu!

Wauw...

Damn det er godt !
Du har overhovedet ingen grund til at være nervøs for det!
Det er kræftedme smukt ! Very Happy

Emne: Sv: I'll Never Leave You s/a Lør Dec 06, 2008 11:57 pm

wow hvor er det godt Shocked

fik helt klumper i halsen. hehe