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IndlægEmne: Never again. s/a   Never again. s/a EmptyTirs Dec 09, 2008 6:48 pm

Hey fellas ! Very Happy

Jeg har skrevet min første stand alone så... her er den!
Er lidt nervøs for den...
Men en gang skal jo være den første ! Very Happy
Så.,..
Here we goes..

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You were the only one who loved me.
You were the only one who needed me.
You were the only one to hold me.
You were the only one.

We fell in love, a bright summer night in June.
You’re blue eyes sparkled just like the moon.
You soft lips gently kissed mine.
I faded in to a whole new world.

I was sitting at home.
I was waiting for you.
You never came.
I couldn’t sleep.
You knew I how I felt!
You knew how I trusted you!
You knew my fears!
You knew me!

The first time I told you how I felt you just smiled.
You said it was okay.
You said hat you would be there to take care of me.
You knew I couldn’t stand being alone.
I knew you would let me down.

“For you Harry!”
I turned the bottle upside down.
The tears ran down my cheeks.
You called me.
You told me.
You left me.

The bathroom floor felt cold against me cheek.
It started to work.
You knew I loved you.
You knew how I wanted to spend my life with you.
You didn’t just leave me.
You had spent the night with her.
With that girl.
You cheated on me Harry Judd.
Just when I needed you the most.

You found me.
But it was too late.
I was gone.
You couldn’t save me.
You cried.
You said you loved me.
It was too late Harry.
Too late.

Everyday you came to my grave you got me flowers.
My favourites.
But you forgot me Harry.
You only came once a week now.
Then once a month.
Now only once a year.
You got your succes Harry.
You became the famous drummer you always wanted to be.
But you forgot about me.
You’re happy know.
Now it’s a new girl.
You love her more than you loved me.
I’m glad you’re happy Harry.
I really am.
I made your life miserable.
I made your life a hell.
I’m glad you got rid of me.
Now I won’t bother you again.
Never again.
Never.

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Så hva syns i ? Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Never again. s/a   Never again. s/a EmptyTirs Dec 09, 2008 6:50 pm

Sad

sikke nogle triste S/A's I alle skriver - men gode!!
jeg tror jeg vil skrive en glad S/A Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Never again. s/a   Never again. s/a EmptyTirs Dec 09, 2008 7:16 pm

Smukt, Mille!
Wauw !!

Jaeh, det er nok det triste tema der er kommet på banen Razz
Jeg har gang i min næste og er glad og skøn Very Happy I promise, haha!
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Mille
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Never again. s/a   Never again. s/a EmptyTirs Dec 09, 2008 8:13 pm

Ja måske skulle man forsøge sig med sådan et ;D
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IndlægEmne: Sv: Never again. s/a   Never again. s/a EmptyLør Dec 13, 2008 7:59 pm

Den er virkelig smuk Shocked
Men ja, det er godt nok nogle triste stand-alones i laver! (;
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