Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 9:16 pm
Hey. (: Maria her. At the moment skriver et fic med Hannah, en engelsk pige, og indtil videre elsker jeg det virkelig, så jeg synes jeg ville lægge det ud her. ^_^
Det er på engelsk, da Hannah jo ikke kan dansk.
Rating: Jeg har sat den på 13+, fordi jeg indtil videre ikke ved endnu, hvor meget banden og andet der vil være i, men jeg skal nok huske at advare hvis der kommer noget der kan virke meget stødende.
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Prologue
What happens on the last day of school? Will it change your life forever? What happens when your best friend, you’ve been in love with since forever, confesses his feelings? How will you react? What happens when your friend says he might be in love with you, but you have to tell him you don’t feel the same way? Will you still be friends? What happens when they move away? Will the relationship last as it was before? Or change? and what happens when you’re so far away from each other that you have no clue what your other part is doing? Well.. We’re about to find out.
We are Hannah and Maria, and our story starts on our last day of school; Our prom!
Jeg vil putte det første kapitel op, når jeg har hørt et par kommentare om hvad I synes om prologue'en. (:
sofiee- Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1179 Age : 30 Location : mellem Horsens & Silkeborg Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 9:18 pm
det lyder godt. glæder mig til at læse den ;b
Carolaade Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1529 Age : 31 Location : Fyn - Ringe Registration date : 02/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 9:19 pm
det lyder spændende. glæder mig sgu til at læse det.
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 9:21 pm
Mange tak. ^_^ Det gør mig glad at I kan lide det.
mcflys Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 883 Age : 30 Location : Silkeborg Registration date : 24/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 9:33 pm
JA.. lyder god.. (: Hehe
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 9:36 pm
Mange tak. ^_^
1 del kommer op om få minutter
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 9:49 pm
*Hannah's POV*
“Maria, will you hurry up? We’re going to be late!” I shouted up the stairs to her as I reapplied my mascara for the third time. “Yeah, yeah, I’m coming now!” She shouted back “You said that half an hour ago the guys will be here any minute!” I shouted as I heard her grumble. That girl is never ready on time, I thought to myself as I ran a comb through my hair. You see tonight is our prom night, after this we will officially be free!! We decided to go with a group of lads, mainly because girls are too bitchy and we haven’t got dates. Yeah I know, our prom, and we don’t have dates, how sad it that? Luckily we have an amazing bunch of lads we hand around with that don’t mind us tagging along. We’ve even got a limo picking us up! How amazing is that! Which reminds me... “MILEY! Seriously! Hurry the hell up!” I shouted for the seventh time already “I’m here now” She said starting to walk down the stairs. “Ohh, don’t you look sexy.” I giggled as she walked down the stairs. Her red frilled dress gliding around her knees. A strapless number, which she never particularly liked about the dress. Her hair curled into ringlets, and make up done to perfection, as always. She had silver strappy heels on, and silver jewelery to match. “Says you.” She laughed reaching the bottom. I, however, had chosen a strapless green number, similar in length to Miley’s, and again with silver heels and accessories. My hair was straight, and the dress less frills. Otherwise, we were more or less the same. “Ready to go?” I asked as there was a knock at the door. “Ready as I’ll ever be.” She laughed as we answered the door together. There stood Tom and Dougie. “Ohh, don’t you both look smart.” I teased knowing they hated wearing tuxedos. “We look like penguins.” Dougie pouted as we laughed. “And you two look gorgeous!” Tom added. “Thanks.” We both said. “Let’s go girlies, we don’t want to be late now do we?” Dougie laughed standing one side of the door, ushering us out as Tom made his way to the limo, holding the door open for us. “Now this is what I call service!” Maria said as she stepped into the limo joining Danny and Harry along with their dates, Julia and Amy, who both looked stunning.
Carolaade Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1529 Age : 31 Location : Fyn - Ringe Registration date : 02/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 9:54 pm
det er jo pisse godt. jeg elsker den måde det er skrevet på d:
Line Admin
Antal indlæg : 1418 Age : 32 Location : Nyborg, Fyn Registration date : 10/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 10:04 pm
rigtig rigtig godt!
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Man Mar 03, 2008 10:05 pm
iih. Mange tak. Jeg skal huske at fortælle Hannah, at I kan lide det. ^_^
Mia-xxx McFlyer
Antal indlæg : 56 Age : 30 Location : Silkeborg Registration date : 04/02/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Ons Mar 05, 2008 5:02 pm
MILEY!!! jeg elsker den her!! og det ved du os godt xD Den er amzingly brillant ;P
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Ons Mar 05, 2008 9:23 pm
Tak, Mia. ^_^ haha. Her er mere. (:
*Maria’s POV*
‘Wow!’ I exclaimed noticing Amy and Julia. ‘You look fabulastic!’ ‘Thanks.’ They both smiled. ‘and thank god, there isn’t any alcohol at the prom.’ Julia added, rolling her eyes while smirking.
I was well on my way to my hyper state, which I am always in when there’s a party, hence the word ‘fabulastic’, and that’s why they usually not allow me to drink that much, ‘cause I‘ll be too wild, but I always manage to drink a few beers behind their backs somehow.
‘There probably will be someone bringing booze.’ I winked at her. ‘But you aren’t getting any!’ she winked back. ‘Don’t worry. I will.’ I assured her in a matter-of-factly tone. ‘Oh yeah? Not with me on the watch.’ Tom butted in. I looked at him at his sudden comment, and I'm almost sure I saw him blush, but he turned away before I could see him properly. Everyone was quiet for a while. ‘I wish someone would’ve asked me to the prom.’ I sighed breaking the silence. ‘Me too.’ Hannah joined my sighing. ‘Oi!’ Dougie and Tom shouted in unison. ‘No offence boys, but you only asked us because nobody else did. Remember?’
*Flashback*
‘Hannah, there’s four days until the prom, and not one guy has even looked at us. Why?’ I asked dramatically while putting my tray on the table, sitting down and burying my head in my hands. ‘I understand why nobody has looked at me, but you? I don’t understand why you haven’t got a date yet.’ She sighed ‘Hannah!’ I said sternly ‘You know, as well as I do, that just two months ago every boy in school was drooling over you, but now it’s like.. we’re both invisible.’ ‘What are you sitting here and mocking about?’ Dougie interrupted, joining the round table, followed by Tom, Amy and Harry. ‘It’s just, we haven’t got any dates yet, and we only have four days left to be asked in. Who ever came up with this only-boy-ask-girl idea this year, should be punished. Big time!’ I groaned. ‘Well, coincidence is, that me and Doug actually haven’t got dates as well, so we could take you, if you want?’ Tom suggested, looking up from his plate full of French fries and ketchup, he carelessly threw into his mouth once in a while when he wasn‘t playing with it. I looked at Hannah expecting her to instantly say yes, but instead she was staring at her plate avoiding Dougie’s eyes. I decided to help her. I shrugged. ‘Why not? As long as you won’t bring any fries!’ Smirking, he pointed one of the fries, covered in ketchup, at me. ‘You better get used to it. It’s the only thing I eat.’ ‘So, I take it as you’re my date?’ ‘Looks like it.’ ‘So Han-Pan. Looks like you’re going with Dougie, eh?’ I nudged her in the side. She raised her head, and smiled. ‘Yeah. It does.’
*End of flashback*
‘But we still asked you.’ Dougie pouted. ‘Technically, Tom asked us.’ Hannah stated ‘But, yes, it was very nice of you.’ She smiled widely. ‘I can’t wait to see which band they got this year!’ I beamed, completely out of subject. ‘I hope it’s one of them Rock’n’roll bands. You know like the one in Grease!’ Danny grinned. ‘Sure, and then we’ll all run onto the dance floor and dance every cheesy move they did back then.’ Harry smirked with sarcasm written all over it. ‘That’d be soooo cool’ Danny almost screamed. We all just looked at him and rolled our eyes.
The limo pulled up beside the decorated doors which led into the, usually, smelly gym, but not today. Today, the gym smelled nicely of some sort of cinnamon.
Sidst rettet af Miley Ons Mar 05, 2008 9:47 pm, rettet 1 gang
Carolaade Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1529 Age : 31 Location : Fyn - Ringe Registration date : 02/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Ons Mar 05, 2008 9:39 pm
jeg er vild med den :'D det er virkelig godt skrevet. & masser af humor. det er jo skønt.
Line Admin
Antal indlæg : 1418 Age : 32 Location : Nyborg, Fyn Registration date : 10/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Ons Mar 05, 2008 9:45 pm
det er godt!!.. virkelig godt!
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Ons Mar 05, 2008 9:46 pm
Mange, mange, mange tak. Jeg er virkelig glad for at der er nogle der læser det. Og kan lide det.
sofiee- Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1179 Age : 30 Location : mellem Horsens & Silkeborg Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Ons Mar 05, 2008 10:23 pm
jeg syntes det er skide godt (: kan også rigtig godt lide måden den er skrevet på ;b
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Ons Mar 05, 2008 10:24 pm
Mange tak, Sofie. ^_^
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Lør Mar 08, 2008 4:26 pm
Er der nogen, der vil have en del til?
Mia-xxx McFlyer
Antal indlæg : 56 Age : 30 Location : Silkeborg Registration date : 04/02/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Lør Mar 08, 2008 4:29 pm
JA!!!!! xD update x]
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Lør Mar 08, 2008 4:30 pm
aah. xD Mia, du har allerede læst det. haha.
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Tirs Mar 11, 2008 10:58 pm
Er der ingen (udover Mia) der vil have mere? >_<
Ditte Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 30 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Tirs Mar 11, 2008 11:02 pm
Miley skrev:
Er der ingen (udover Mia) der vil have mere? >_<
JO, da! sidder bare og venter på at det kommer ;D
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Tirs Mar 11, 2008 11:19 pm
Orv. Ok. ^_^ Så kommer der en del til, her. (:
*Hannah's POV*
As we stepped out of the limo, each of the guys linked their arms with their dates. I found it a little funny that I was taller than Dougie, but hey, I didn’t care. As we walked into the gym, we gasped. It had never looked so, well, clean! Red silk was draped around the room from the ceiling, the floor covered with wooden panels, tables with neatly arranged vases of roses stood around the edge of the hall, leaving space to dance in the middle and the smell of cinnamon drifted through the air. “Woah.” Said Juulz as she walked in, her and Danny’s still arms entwined. Everyone else still seemed to have contact – Amy and Harry were now holding hands and Tom had his arm around Riles – yet me and Dougie seemed to let go of each other once we entered the hall. Truth is, I’m slightly uncomfortable with being here with Dougie tonight, as I have had a crush on him since... well I don’t remember, and having him here only as a sympathy date is kind of embarrassing. “Hannah?” Amy said waving her hand in front of my face “Welcome back” She laughed as I finally turned to face her. “Sorry, daydreaming.” I laughed following her to where the others had found a table. “Drinks anyone?” Tom asked as I reached the table. “Oh yes, please.” I said, chorused by almost identical responses. “I’ll help.” Harry said standing up. “Somehow, I don’t think it’s possible to carry eight drinks on your own.” he laughed. “Oh, I think it is.” Tom grinned as he and Harry walked over to the punch, Tom trying to balance 8 cups in his hands, and we laughed at him failing miserably. “Spill any down you and I won’t dance with you, Thomas Fletcher.” Maria threatened across the hall, and Tom smirked at her, nearly spilling a cupful down himself. I sat in the spare seat in between Danny and Dougie. Dougie shifted uncomfortably in his chair. I don’t know what to do, do I move away or do I move closer? I just sat there, confused, until Tom and Harry walked back over “Couldn’t do it?” I asked. “Nahh, it was the shape of them, if they were smaller...” He said as he placed four cups down, as did Harry as we all laughed. “Denial.” Danny laughed as music began to play. “Ohhh, let’s dance!” Said Juju, jumping to her feet, grabbing Danny’s hand as she did. Amy did the same to Harry and soon they were dancing, oddly, on the dance floor. Tom looked to Maria. “Why not.” She laughed as they joined the others. “Ermm, do... do you wanna dance?” Dougie said quietly. “Do you?” I asked. He looked at me and smiled. “Sure, I’ve got nothing better to do.” he smirked. “Shut up you!” I said hitting his arm laughing. “Oi, I’ll get you.” “If you can catch me.” I laughed making my way carefully, as fast as I could, to the dance floor. He soon caught up with me, hiding behind Danny and Juju. Damn these shoes I thought. “You’re in for it now.” He smiled evilly at me. He grabbed me, just as a slow song began to play. “You gotta dance now.” I laughed putting my arms around his neck. “Argh, I hate slow songs.” He moaned. “Oh, shut up and enjoy it.” I laughed and winked over at Maria, who looked very comfortable with Tom.
Line Admin
Antal indlæg : 1418 Age : 32 Location : Nyborg, Fyn Registration date : 10/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Ons Mar 12, 2008 12:14 am
Hamrende godt Maria
Miley Little Joanna
Antal indlæg : 216 Age : 31 Location : København Registration date : 01/01/08
Emne: Sv: That somebody is me. [13+] Fre Mar 14, 2008 6:24 pm