Anita's Fic

Ok allesammen, jeg har tænkt på at lægge min fic herind som jeg skriver lidt på, men vil lige høre om der er nogen der har lyst til at læse den først inden jeg begynder at poste

uuuh, lyder spændende - jeg vil meget gerne læse den

Jeg har faktisk skrevet 45 sider hahah så der sku være nok at ta af men jeg poster først i aften når jeg kommer hjem fra arbejde... ka ikk rigtig nå det endnu...
men så ka jeg jo også lige se om der er flere der ku tænke sig at læse min...

45 sider??!!
omg.
det er godt nok meget, hihi

Lyder godt xD Hehe.. Glæder mig til at læse den (;

Jeg er også frisk ! Come on honey .

Uh! En fic fra Anita Nøj jeg glæder mig, og 45 sider - fantastisk!

weee!! det lyder wonderdanny!!
wop!

jaaa ! ;b glæder mig til at læse den Anita

Jeg vil gerne læse den!

uh ja det glemte jeg og sige
jeg vil også gerne læse den ;D

hehe jeg må desværre skuffe jer alle for når ikk at sende nogen i aften...
er kommet til skade på mit arbejde og blevet syet i panden haha ej har ikk klap for øjet men den ramte øjnbrynet hehe
anyways min mor og far vil ha jeg sover hos dem og min fic ligger jo på min egen com...
Men det er da dejligt at der er så meget respons..

Ann-Jones skrev:

hehe jeg må desværre skuffe jer alle for når ikk at sende nogen i aften...
er kommet til skade på mit arbejde og blevet syet i panden haha ej har ikk klap for øjet men den ramte øjnbrynet hehe
anyways min mor og far vil ha jeg sover hos dem og min fic ligger jo på min egen com...
Men det er da dejligt at der er så meget respons..

Okay, det er vidst fair nok.. Håber ikke det var slemt :S

McFlyLover<3 skrev:

Ann-Jones skrev:

hehe jeg må desværre skuffe jer alle for når ikk at sende nogen i aften...
er kommet til skade på mit arbejde og blevet syet i panden haha ej har ikk klap for øjet men den ramte øjnbrynet hehe
anyways min mor og far vil ha jeg sover hos dem og min fic ligger jo på min egen com...
Men det er da dejligt at der er så meget respons..

Okay, det er vidst fair nok.. Håber ikke det var slemt :S

neej... har hovedpine, og ska ikk vrikke så meget med øjnbrynet, men ellers mærker jeg det næsten ikk hehe...
men tror det var mest fordi min mor ville sikre sig at jeg ikk havde fået hjernerystelse eller sårn noget?
det er meget svært at forklare hva der skete når i ikk ved hva jeg arbejder med hehe... men blev ramt af sådan en metalstang lige i panden...

ej hvor sygt!
Håber du er okay (:

God bedring, Anita

hey peeps.. Som i nok ved, så har Anita ikke lige sin fic på sig lige nu. MEN heldigvis har jeg den =D
Så jeg har fået lov til at poste nogle af de første sider. Så her begynder den.

The Greatest Thing In The World!

It’s in the middle of January and in a few days Anita was going to London with 3 of her friends; Diana, Malene and Jane. Anita loved that place, this time it was for shopping and just having fun, she kept thinking that the coolest thing would be if she met McFly in some kinda way, she wouldn’t know what she’d do if she did though, but she just knew, that no matter what it’d be cool.

Anita was about to log on to MSN and soon after her friend Sally wrote

°o.O Sally O.o° | !! Another year over, and we're still together ( –
Heey, soo only 2 days till you’re going to the big city of London J

A n i t a | London in 2 days!! –
I know, I soo can’t wait…

They both kept typing for ages as usual. About how it was going to be, and what if she met Danny and stuff like that..

2 days later!
Anita: yes I’ve finally packed all my stuff
Anita was going to be picked up by Diana’s mum, who were going to drive them to the Airport in Billund, and she would be arriving in around 10 minutes, so Anita had just made her last double check before she was going, just to make sure that she hadn’t forgotten anything.

2 hours later they were all 4 about to check in at Billund airport and everything went as planned, as they arrived in Stansted they took the trains to Liverpool Street Station, and from there they took central line to Bayswater station (I think that’s where we are going to be)
An hour later they’d all checked into the hotel and were just chillin’ out in the hotel room, and went to sleep soon after.

The next day they were all walking down Oxford Street shopping when Anita crashed her shoulder against someone she groaned in pain and turned around saying
Anita: God I’m so sorry, I really should start to look where I’m going
(then she noticed it was Danny from Mcfly and he said)
Danny: Noo, the faults all mine… (he said bending down to collect her stuff from the ground that she lost when they crashed against each other) where are you from? (he said noticing her accent… after a little thinking) haven’t I seen you before?
Anita: Erm yes you have actually… do you remember that interview you had with a Danish TV programme a few months ago? I was one of the fans…
Danny: Oh yeah! I remember… cool… soo you’re a Dane then… What are you doing here then?
Anita: I’m here with some friends (she said pointing in the other direction, and noticed her friends had disappeared) who’ve disappeared now… great… Anyways it’s just for shopping and having fun actually.
Danny: cool… sorry about your friends, I hope you’ll find them again…
(there was a bit of silence before Danny started talking again)
Danny: Soo, how long are you staying for then?
Anita: Only the weekend… we might go out tonight… (she said hoping he’d seem interested)
Danny: Cool, where to?
Anita: I don’t know, my friend Diana is most known here, cos she lived here for like 9 months or something… not in London, a bit outside, but she was here quite a lot…
Danny: Cool… I usually go to this pub not far away from here. (he told her the name of the pub and the road where it was)
Anita: Cool… Maybe we should try that then… Oh I better go and find my friends before they get too worried.
Danny: Sure… nice to meet you again..!
Anita: yeah, you too…
And then they parted, and Anita went to find her friends.

Danny went home and as he got into his apartment he heard a woman’s voice saying ‘hey babe’ and knew right away that it was Olivia. And he suddenly started feeling weird, in a way guilty but in a way not.
Danny: Hi (he said back and kissed her) I might go around Harry’s later…
Olivia: Danny you only just got in, you’re almost never home?
Danny: I know… but I promised Harry I’d be around…
Olivia: Danny you’re always together with them, how come you never wanna spend time with me anymore?
Danny: Honey I do… I’m here now aren’t I? And there are still a few hours till I’ll be going again…
Olivia: I know I’m sorry, I just feel like you’re never here…
Danny: you’ve known from the beginning that I wouldn’t be home much…
Olivia: I know… (she said and stopped as she didn’t wanna start a fight about it) so how’ve your day been?
Danny: It’s been alright… we just recorded some songs and stuff… I missed you though *he said kissing her*
Olivia: I missed you too *she said kissing him back*
Things heated up and Danny pushed her down to the couch, when suddenly pictures of Anita popped into his mind, he quickly pulled away and looked at Olivia, who had a weird expression on her face.
Olivia: What’s wrong? Did I do anything weird?
Danny: No… no you didn’t… I just suddenly feel really weird… I’m sorry… I think I need a shower…
Olivia looked weirdly at him when he left the room, and sat back, then she got an idea, and went to her and Danny’s room.
Danny went into the shower and let the water fall down his body and started thinking, he didn’t know why he suddenly started seeing pictures of someone he barely knew, it felt weird and wrong. But somehow he couldn’t stop it. He finished the shower and wrapped a towel around his waist, and then went into the bedroom to see his girlfriend lying on the bed with a really sexy night dress thing, he sort of jumped back as he was surprised to see her like that… he looked at her scanning her body with his eyes then looked her in the eyes and smiled. He slowly walked over to the bed and sat down on the edge, and then chuckled before he said.
Danny: wow you look really great *and kissed her* but I’m sorry to say this but I’ll be going around Harry’s in 15 minutes…
Olivia: you look so hot when you’re all wet and stuff *she said looking up and down his body*
Danny: Olivia, would you please listen to what I’m saying *he said laughing slightly*
Olivia: I’m sorry Danny, I heard what you said, but can’t Harry wait a bit *she said sitting up a little, and gripped his neck and pulling him towards her, kissing him passionately*
Danny: Hmm yeah I think he can wait a while… *and then he gently pushed her down onto the bed kissing her*
This time Danny just blocked away the thoughts of Anita.

uuuhh, hvor godt
mer' mer' mer'!

glad for du ka li det hehe

more to come =D


Back with Anita, she was walking around thinking about Danny, she only just found her friends again, who of course had gotten worried, and she told them what happened, and they of course thought it was cool. Now they were heading back to the hotel they were staying at and went to get ready for a night out. Malene and Diana had told Anita about these guys that Malene knew, who were here as well, and they were gonna meet up with them.
Anita: great, but where are we going to meet them then?
Diana: we decided to go to this pub that I’ve heard about, I haven’t really been there before, but I’ve been told it’s really awesome, so I thought we should go there today..
Anita: ok yeah that sounds great. So where is it?
And she told her about the same place Danny had talked about earlier, she didn’t say anything about it though, cos she didn’t wanna seem crazy so she just answered with a ‘sounds cool’ and started to find out what to wear. She’d just bought a skirt today when they were out shopping, and a pair of black leggings, she’d also bought 2 new tops, and decided to wear one of them to go with the skirt and when she found out what to wear she went to have a shower, and then after she got into her clothes and admired herself in the mirror, and said to herself ‘wow this actually looks cool’
Anita: Diana would you do my hair today? Cos I really don’t know what to do about it…
Diana: Sure I will, but Malene wants me to do hers as well…
Malene: Yeah but you can do hers first, I’m far from ready to that yet…
Anita: thanks Malene J
Then a few hours later all girls were ready to go out… they had to go out for dinner first, so they went to a restaurant that was near the pub.

Back with Danny
The time seemed to run faster than Danny thought, cos he was now half an hour late and only on his way out…
Danny: bye babe, I’ll see you tomorrow, cos I’ll be in late alright *he said kissing her*
Olivia: ok… I was hoping to see you before I went to sleep, but I’ll be alright… don’t get too drunk though right?
Danny: sure I won’t *he said kissing her again, and went out of the door*
Luckily Harry lived in a walking distance from him, so he put on his hat and went to Harry’s, he knocked on the door and Harry answered a few minutes later
Harry: Heey mate, ‘you alright?
Danny: Yeah I’m great… *he said and stepped inside*
Harry: you’re a little late though?
Danny: hmm yeah, I haven’t seen Olivia much these past weeks so, I couldn’t just walk out on her right away…
Harry: ah, I understand, me and Izzy aren’t doing that well at the moment… I don’t think I have those feelings for her anymore…
Danny: really? When are you going to tell her that?
Harry: I don’t know, I don’t know how to tell her… but let’s not talk about this now, come on in…
Danny and Harry went to the living room, and started talking about everything then suddenly Danny came to think about Anita again.
Danny: ok this might seem really weird to you but do you remember those 2 girls who interviewed us a few months ago… who were from Denmark…?
Harry: Yeah… why?
Danny: I ran into one of them today, and when I say ran in, I mean ran into her…
Harry: Really which one of them? I think I recall one of them were pretty cute? The short and shy one?
Danny: that’s the one I ran into today…
Harry: really? Cool? Was she nice then?
Danny: yeah she really was… but the thing is, today when I got home and things with me and Olivia got pretty intense, then suddenly I got pictures of her inside of my head, so I stopped doing what I was doing, I mean that’s never happened before, why do you think I did that, I really like Olivia?
Harry: I don’t know… maybe it’s because you only just met that girl and thought she was nice… look I think we should go out and get drunk… what do you say? Then you’d be able to forget about this whole Olivia/fan thing… what’s her name?
Danny: I actually don’t know? Never asked her about that… but yeah that seems like a great idea…
Then they got out a couple of beers and started drinking a bit, and then an hour later they went to the same pub as the girls planned to go to. But even though Harry told him to forget about her he couldn’t, he kept thinking if she came to this pub or something, so he looked towards the door all the time. When suddenly he saw Anita walking in, looking hotter than ever, but she hadn’t noticed him yet… she came in with 3 other girls and suddenly 3 guys came over to them obviously some of them knew each other from somewhere, then they all went in the other direction from them and Danny patted Harry on the shoulder and said
Danny: Dude, that’s her!
Harry looked up confused
Harry: Who, where?
Danny: That Dane I met earlier, right there, the one with the black skirt…
Harry: wow she really does look good…
Danny: Ok mate stop that… you have Izzy…
Harry: but I’m already planning on breaking up with her
Danny: Harry!!
Harry: ok I’m sorry I’ll get us some beers…
As Harry went to get some beers Danny watched Anita’s every move, she kept smiling and laughing, with her friends, she didn’t talk much to the guys, but then suddenly one of the guys started talking to her, he was hitting on her badly, and she didn’t seem that comfortable with that… Danny moved his attention away from Anita as Harry came back from the bar
Harry: god Danny, be glad she haven’t seen you yet, your eyes are about to pop out…
Danny: I’m sorry… I just really wanna talk to her, but she seems too occupied at the moment…
As he looked back he saw Anita stand up and walking to the ladies room, she looked kinda annoyed, so he started drinking his beer and Harry downed his, he was really starting to get drunk, he went to the bar and had a new one, and he started going on about Izzy again and about how things didn’t work out, it was getting too much for Danny, and when he saw Anita walk out from the ladies room again Harry was so drunk he could barely sit up normally, so Danny took one last glance at Anita, who were heading for the bar, and then took an arm around Harry and helped him get out, and then Danny got a cap and helped Harry in it then told the taxi driver where to go to, and then Danny went back inside, heading for the bar.

danny burde ta' sig sammen og snakke med anita
rigtig godt

det ka jo også være han gør det snart haha..
Det næste får i iaften når jeg kommer hjem fra arbejde..

Ann-Jones skrev:

det ka jo også være han gør det snart haha..
Det næste får i iaften når jeg kommer hjem fra arbejde..

yaay

Det er super godt! Jeg glæder mig så meget til der kommer mere!

Aj hvor er det godt!! Glæder mig til der kommer mere!!