Prøve; Famous Last Words

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Fre Dec 26, 2008 2:36 am

Super godt xD haha.. fuck jeg elsker sidste sætning.. (:

Glæder mig til at se hvad der sker, og om Dougie kan hjælpe hende.. uuuh.. :b

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Dec 27, 2008 7:57 pm

Tak for alle jeres dejlige comments.
Det betyder meget for mig, det er det der får mig til at fortsætte.
Er næsten færdig med næste chapter,
så der kommer nok mere, idag eller imorgen. Razz

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Dec 27, 2008 10:02 pm

Mere fic anyone?
Har lige skrevet det næste add færdig.. Wink

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Dec 27, 2008 10:06 pm

Ditte skrev:: Mere fic anyone?
Har lige skrevet det næste add færdig..

Ja da!

du behøver ikke spørge, bare post post post! (;

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Dec 27, 2008 10:08 pm

Ditte skrev:: Mere fic anyone?
Har lige skrevet det næste add færdig..

Jaaaaaaaaaaa!! Very Happy

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Dec 27, 2008 10:19 pm

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Chapter six;

Tom looked at the table, it was coverd by glasses. His eyes immediately fell on Danny and Dougie.
They grinned and cheersed again.
Bella picked up her glass and finished it, slammig down on the table getting to her feet.
"Tooooommmy!"She breathed and pulled him out to the dance floor.
She danced and giggled at Tom, who, lets say, tried to dance. She took his hands and swong around grinning madly.

"Don't you think you've get enough to drink!"Tom breathed as Bella had giving up on him
and walked up to the bare to get a somersby.
"Not enough, I've seen far to much!"She smiled and let her arm around him,
feeling him shaking his head and walking her down to the table.
"How can it be that not even one single girl, have been up here to get all the usual stuff?"
Bella slide in next to Danny and looked at Giovanna trying to pull Tom out of the club.
"Well, because this club isn't for anyone!"Harry grinned and looked at her, Bella smiled.
She was anyone, how can she get in then?
Tom walked tired up to the table and said byye,
he had given up and needed to get Gio home.

"Bell"Danny breathed into her ear, she moved her head and looked into his eyes.
Doug and Harry were busy on the dance floor doing some kind of 'robot-dance'.
She giggled and felt his warm breath on her nose.
"Dan?" Danny turned his head and looked at Doug and Harry,
they were in the middle of the dance floor and people were starting to grin a bit of them.
"You're beautiful!"He breathed and slide closer to her,
her cheek blushed and she bite down on her bottom lip.
"Really!"He said in a casual voice.
Her head was spinning, and she had forgot everything about Mitch and Barbie,
even the help from Dougie, was faded away in her view.
All she could see was the brown curly, freckled gorgeous guy sitting rather close to her,
whispering cheeky things into her ear.

"Get your coat or I'll get bored!"
"What? havent I heard that somewhere else?" Bella grinned at Danny's lame chat-up line.
"You may have, but in someway I think it could work!"He grinned, Bella hit his arm and sat up normal.
"So you think I'm easy?" She asked, everything she heard, could easy turn into bad things,
and she knew herself that she took too many things too personal. Danny quickly put his hands up in defence.
"Nooo!!" He said loudly and made a few boys turn their heads and looked weirdly at him,
he raised an eyebrown and looked back on Bella.
"Dance?" Bella grabbed his hand and walked smiling down on the floor resting her head on his chest.
She breathed in and took her head away from Danny's chest looking into his deep blue sparkling eyes,
he smiled warmly to her.

Bella slowly lean forwards as the music stopped, not loosing eye contact with Danny,
she stepped up on her toes and Danny softly smiled, before their lips met, in a long and soft kiss.
Bella looked up on a smiling Danny, he hold her tight and pulled her in for a hug.
She cuddled up to him and smiled, at least something good had come out of this awful day.

Dougie and Harry had finally stopped the weird robot dancing,
while Harry had decided to go up to the bare to get two beers so they could celebrat their awesome dancing,
Dougie had turned around on the dance floor and made his way towards the guys table.
As he sat down his eyes cut Bella and Danny.
He looked stiff at them as Bella got up on her toes and her and Danny's lips met.

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Hvad synes i tøser?

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Dec 27, 2008 10:25 pm

ej, det er seriøst goooooodt!! Very Happy

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Dec 27, 2008 10:27 pm

Lovely

- Super godt, som sædvanlig

Uh, er Dougie lidt jaloux? -.-

Mere når du kan Smile

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Søn Dec 28, 2008 12:15 am

Hold kæftig Det er dulme godt (:
I Loooove it <3
Mere snart

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Søn Dec 28, 2008 2:04 am

Åh Ditte.....

Jeg tilbeder dig og denne fic !!!

Den er bare så genial !!
Men havde sgu ikke lige regnet med Danny og Bella !? (Som du allerede ved ;p)

Mere meget snart !? Very Happy

<3

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Søn Dec 28, 2008 2:11 am

Mille skrev:: Åh Ditte.....

Jeg tilbeder dig og denne fic !!!

Den er bare så genial !!
Men havde sgu ikke lige regnet med Danny og Bella !? (Som du allerede ved ;p)

Mere meget snart !? <3

Hahhah.

tusind tak Mille.. Dejligt at hører!
Gøre mig mega glad!
Mere, hmm.. Er næsten færdig med næste chapter.. Men vil ikke lægge det ind endnu!

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Søn Dec 28, 2008 2:23 am

Ditte skrev:

Mille skrev:: Åh Ditte.....

Jeg tilbeder dig og denne fic !!!

Den er bare så genial !!
Men havde sgu ikke lige regnet med Danny og Bella !? (Som du allerede ved ;p)

Mere meget snart !? <3

Hahhah.

tusind tak Mille.. Dejligt at hører!
Gøre mig mega glad!
Mere, hmm.. Er næsten færdig med næste chapter.. Men vil ikke lægge det ind endnu!

JO JO JOOOO !!!
Jeg kan ikke vente på mere !!
I'm hooked !!! Very Happy

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Søn Dec 28, 2008 2:32 am

Mille skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Mille skrev:: Åh Ditte.....

Jeg tilbeder dig og denne fic !!!

Den er bare så genial !!
Men havde sgu ikke lige regnet med Danny og Bella !? (Som du allerede ved ;p)

Mere meget snart !? <3

Hahhah.

tusind tak Mille.. Dejligt at hører!
Gøre mig mega glad!
Mere, hmm.. Er næsten færdig med næste chapter.. Men vil ikke lægge det ind endnu!

JO JO JOOOO !!!
Jeg kan ikke vente på mere !!
I'm hooked !!! Very Happy

Hahahha.. Desværre. Du er nok nødtil at vente lidt endnu.. Laughing

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Søn Dec 28, 2008 3:25 am

Ditte skrev:

Mille skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Mille skrev:: Åh Ditte.....

Jeg tilbeder dig og denne fic !!!

Den er bare så genial !!
Men havde sgu ikke lige regnet med Danny og Bella !? (Som du allerede ved ;p)

Mere meget snart !? <3

Hahhah.

tusind tak Mille.. Dejligt at hører!
Gøre mig mega glad!
Mere, hmm.. Er næsten færdig med næste chapter.. Men vil ikke lægge det ind endnu!

JO JO JOOOO !!!
Jeg kan ikke vente på mere !!
I'm hooked !!! Very Happy

Hahahha.. Desværre. Du er nok nødtil at vente lidt endnu.. Laughing

Æv !

Haha, men så vil jeg glæde mig !!! Very Happy

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Søn Dec 28, 2008 2:54 pm

Mille skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Mille skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Mille skrev:: Åh Ditte.....

Jeg tilbeder dig og denne fic !!!

Den er bare så genial !!
Men havde sgu ikke lige regnet med Danny og Bella !? (Som du allerede ved ;p)

Mere meget snart !? <3

Hahhah.

tusind tak Mille.. Dejligt at hører!
Gøre mig mega glad!
Mere, hmm.. Er næsten færdig med næste chapter.. Men vil ikke lægge det ind endnu!

JO JO JOOOO !!!
Jeg kan ikke vente på mere !!
I'm hooked !!! Very Happy

Hahahha.. Desværre. Du er nok nødtil at vente lidt endnu.. Laughing

Æv !

Haha, men så vil jeg glæde mig !!! Very Happy

Mee too (:
Den er sååååå god.

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Man Dec 29, 2008 1:36 am

Jep mega godt! xD det havde jeg slet ikke set komme ö stakkels lille Doug.. Så må han tage sig lidt sammen og lade være med at danse robot dans med Harry!? (;

Mere snaart!

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Tors Jan 08, 2009 6:02 pm

Har ikke added noget... i næsten to uger nu..
undskyld, men har så meget at tænke på lige nu med skolen.
jeg mangler lige det sidste touch på added, inden jeg ligger det ind.
håber at i alle sammen kan vente.
Plus tilgive mig for, at være så doven. ;D

mere meget snart.

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Tors Jan 08, 2009 6:09 pm

Helt iorden, Ditte! Very Happy

Alle er næsten optagede af skolen for tiden, -.-
Og jeg er jo heller ikke den hurtigste til at adde, så jeg skal hvert fald ikke klage! (;

Glæder mig til mere, bare tag dig god tid Smile

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Tors Jan 08, 2009 7:20 pm

Undskylder for alt!! ;D
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Chapter seven;
"I hate Danny!"Dougie mumbled quietly to himself, this always happened to him.
he found a sweet caring girl, and get a long really well with her,
until Mr. Jones take the next step.
Though Dougie knew that there never would or could be a thing between him and Bella,
he didn't wanna have Danny to ruin what could have been a great friendship.

Danny pressed his lips on Bella's and slowly pulled away.
They still had their arms around each other but they stood still on the dance floor,
while the music played and the sharp lights moved around in the dancing crowd.
"Come."Danny breathed and put his arms around her shoulder,
they reached the table Harry was back and Dougie had already finished his beer.
Bella got out of Danny's arms and grabbed her coat next to Dougie, she lean in and kissed his cheek, before she moved over and hugged Harry.

"Dan.. You're not driving!"Bella said grinning as she and Danny walked towards his black BMW.
"Don't worry, I have one of these breathalyser!"He said and unlocked the car,
Bella followed and sat down in the seat, he blew into the thing and turned on the engine.
"Northing's wrong!"He said and winked at her. Bella nodded and pressed her lips together forming a smile.
As Danny pulled out of the parking lot he placed his free hand on her lap.
She grabbed it and looked at Danny smiling before she turned to look out of the window again.
She had a feeling, that she knew what was going to happen now, was.... In some way wrong.
That she at some point would regret it, and maybe so would he,
she let his hand go and grabbed the handle as Danny had stopped the car.

"Coffee, tea?"Danny asked as they had arrived in his flat, Bella shook her head and looked around in the room, she study everything.
A soft wind blew against her skin and two rough hands got wrapped around her, as she turned around her lips immediately got locked with Danny's, and from the lips locking,
it soon turned into body locking.
She felt his warm body on top of hers,
she could feel how heavy he was breathing and she felt his curly hair between her thin fingers.
Closing her eyes she felt Danny's lips touch hers again, and his body weight and warm disappeared,
she curled herself together and rested her head on Danny's bar chest, were she and Danny felt fast asleep.

Bella opened her eyes, laying in a unfamiliar bright room.
As she rubbed her eyes and turned around she looked at a peacefully Danny laying next to her.
Quiet and quickly she got out of his bed without waking him up, she pulled her panties and bra back on and grabbed her clothes on the floor.
When she had all her clothes on again, she sat down in his couch, confused.
The bed creaked a few times, and her heart was up in her throat.
"Morning!"Danny mumbled tired, Bella turned her head, and watched a half naked Danny walk over to the fridge getting himself something to drink.
Danny sat down in the couch next to her.

“Should I drive you home.. hmm, before.. oh.. this afternoon it has to be?”Danny mumbled and looked at the clock, Bella turned and looked into Danny's blue piercing eyes,
and then back down on her thin boned legs.
“eay cheer up girl!”Danny said and lifted her chin.
“It's just.. Everything really,!”Bella mumbled and looked out of the window,
the sun was setting high in they sky shining on the town of London.
The weather was happy, but she wasn't, there was so many thing she needed to sort out in her life.
The thing that had happened last night, had only made her situation worse.
“Come on, grab your stuff and I'll give you a pleasant drive home!” Danny said and smiled getting up from the couch.
Bella grabbed his wrist and forced him to stop.
“Please don't! Don't force me to go home!”She cried so quiet that she doubted that Danny had heard her.
She felt how the couch moved and she jumped at bit as Danny sat down and forced her weight to jumped.
He smiled and rubbed her back gently before kissing her forehead.
“Thanks... Last night wa-”Bella stopped as the door flushed open and a very tired and upset Dougie walked into the living room.
“We'll talk about it later okay?”Danny grinned cheeky and winked at her,
thinking that she probably would comment on his great talent on stage and in bed.
What he didn't knew was, that Bella had started to regret the night before, of course, it was great..
But she had always been raised to think that sex was something people had, if they loved each other.
The night before was a drunk mistake that shouldn't get repeated, in anyway.

As Danny disappeared, Dougie rushed over to the couch and next to Bella.
He smiled gently to her and placed his legs on the table looking out of the window trying to think of something to say.
“So you stayed the night at here at Danny's then?” He questioned, he moved around uncomfortable and decided to stand up, looking down at her.
Bella got up to Dougie's hight and rolled her eyes.
“I'm not proud of it.. okay so just leave it!”She mumbled and walked out to the kitchen,
where she poured herself another mug of tea.
Dougie walked out to the bathroom and heard the water run, signing that Danny was in the shower,
he walked back out to the kitchen and stood next to Bella tapping his fingers on the table.
“I though you were different, that you knew better, that you were hundred percent clear of the fact was Danny is like!”
Dougie started again,
Bella turned around and looked annoyed up on Dougie.
“You know, I'm just afraid that you're going to be nothing but a toy for him!”Dougie defended himself.
“Yea, I did sleep with Danny, I know how he is. I've regret it, but I have to take responsibility for my actions..
That's what I'm doing! And... What the hell are you doing by messing yourself into this!”Bella hissed
and placed her mug on the table walking out to the hall, where she got her feet into a pair of black high heels.
“I'm going out to get some air!”Bella yelled to Danny,
she grabbed her coat and walked out the door slamming it behind her.

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Håber i kan li' det,
undskylder endnu en gang for vente tiden. ;D

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Tors Jan 08, 2009 7:58 pm

Love it, love it - LOVE IT!!! Very Happy

Super godt afsnit.
Håber virkelig det hele ordner sig Smile

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Tors Jan 08, 2009 9:43 pm

Total godt! Årh hvorfor er danny så dum? Og hvor er det altså lidt synd for Dougie! s: mon han fortæller det til Danny at hun her bulimi? Suspect

hmm..
Mere snart!

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Fre Jan 09, 2009 6:44 pm

Tak, er gald for at i kan li' det ;D

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Fre Jan 09, 2009 11:58 pm

Endelig kom der mere hah.
Det er Skie godt.
Det er godt nok lidt syndt for Dougie :/

Men glæder mig enormt til mere.

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Man Jan 12, 2009 10:10 pm

Tænkte på om der var nogen der vil have mere,
gider ikk og ligge noget ind, hvis ingen læser..
Så, nogen der stadig læser? [;

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Man Jan 12, 2009 10:58 pm

Ditte skrev:: Tænkte på om der var nogen der vil have mere,
gider ikk og ligge noget ind, hvis ingen læser..
Så, nogen der stadig læser? [;

JO MAN! Du må ALDRIG stoppe den! ALDRIG SIGER JEG! Rolling Eyes

nå men.. Jeg vil meget meget meget gerne have mere! ;D