Prøve; Famous Last Words

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Tirs Jan 13, 2009 11:56 am

Nej, du må ikke stoppe!
Jeg kan ikke undvære den her fic!

meremeremere

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Ons Jan 14, 2009 8:26 pm

Ja ditte du kan ikke bare stoppe der! ö vi need closer! xD <3 haha..
så bring it on! Very Happy

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Ons Jan 14, 2009 10:08 pm

Så er næste chapter næsten færdig ;D

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Ons Jan 14, 2009 10:36 pm

TIL EMILIE! ;D
Håber i kan li' det
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Chapter eight;
Two moths had passed, since Bella and Danny have had their first night together.
Bella refused to speak to Dougie, as she demanded to have some privacy ,
whit out him stitching his little bleach-blond hair in between every decision she made.
She had enjoyed her two months with Danny, but she could feel that they both just had some great days,
with a person they cared and loved, just not in the right way.

“Bella, I think we should talk!”Danny called from the living room,
where he was sat in the black sofa with a beer on the table and his guitar on his lap.
Bella walked nervous but smiling into the room and sat down next to him.
“What's up?”She asked cheerful.
Danny placed the guitar on the floor and grabbed his beer leaning relaxed back on the sofa, taking a quick sip.
“This is just not. Right. You know!”He started mumbling which made it hard for Bella to understand what he was saying.
She relaxed her elbow on the back-rest and placed her head in her hand.
“Shh, I know what you're gonna say. You're gonna break this off, and I agree!”She said and sighed looking into Danny's two piercing eyes,
he looked relieved and smiled.
“I just want you to know my reason. Okay?” He started but carried on before she could answer him.
“I think we should get on a ''break'', because, this, us is not right.
When we started to date, I was this selfish person who thought I could everything, that I was the best you ever have had in bed and that.
But when Dougie told me about your eating disorder, I realised that you didn't need the selfish me, but the caring.
If it wasn't for Doug, I'd probably never noticed that you had a problem.
And even now when I know your problem, you still only seem to lo-”Danny said,
but stopped as Bella placed her finger on his lips.
Danny removed her hand.
“I need to say this, If it wasn't for Doug, I'd probably seen you in another way.. in a bad.
And I know that the feelings we have for each others, is true love. But true friend love.”He stopped and looked at a crashed Bella,
her eyes were puffy and red slowly forming tears.
“Eay, I love you, but even when we have been together, you don't seem happy, and you keep losing weight.
You're scaring me!”
Danny said worried and placed his arms around Bella kissing her.
“I hate you Jones!”Bella cried in his arms.
“Hate me for what?”Danny said and pulled out, looking rather hurt,
Bella looked at him and laughed.
“Because you're the most important person in my life, and I don't understand why I don't love you, like I wan to!”
She cried and hit his chest playfully.

“I love you Bella!”Danny said in a soft grin.
“I love you too Jones!”Bella sobbed and softly pressed her thin pink lips on his, smiling before she pulled away.

“Just promise me one thing!?”Danny said from the kitchen where, he was making himself and Bella a sandwich.
She'd promised to eat, without getting guilty and throwing up.
“What's that?” Bella asked and threw her legs on the table and looked at the TV.
“That you'll speak to Dougie again, he's really down. He only did what he did to protect you.
Plus he needs you right now, when Alexia broke up with him!”Danny said
and sat down the plates on the table. Bella sat up and smiled.
“Oh, they broke up? Really?!”She asked looking surprised at Danny,
he nodded and shuffled the sandwich into his mouth.
“Then again. I just wanna control my life, and try to make up for what I've done wrong!”She sighed picking up the plate.
“Cheese?”She asked and looked at Danny pulling a face, he grinned and nodded.
“And you're not taking it out!”He grinned with his mouth full of food.
“Alright, just close your mouth, it's like a sight of hell!”She said annoyed and took a tiny bite of the bread.
“Will do, if you wanna make up for what you've done wrong, maybe it was time for you to see you mother and brother again?”Danny questioned,
Bella hadn't seen her mother since they had a fight, as she had gotten home to pick up her clothes and stay sometime at Danny's.
“Yeah, you're probably right. Mr. Motivator!”She said.
“Eay, that's Harry!”Danny said and took a sip of his beer passing it to Bella afterwards.
She shook her head and looked back on the TV.
She knew Danny was right, and she'd decided that she'd go home and make things up with her mother.
after she had swallowed the king size sandwich.

“Well, I'm off to my mothers, I'll phone you about when I'm coming back.”Bella shouted from the hall
taking the coat over her slim boned arms.
Danny nodded and winked at her, as she waved closing the door behind her.

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håber ikke at nogen blev skuffet.
nå, men hvad synes i så mennesker? ;D

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Ons Jan 14, 2009 10:44 pm

Great Ditte xD men det har jeg også sagt! (; Hehe..
Hvor er Danny blevet sød! Men synes stadig hun skal være sammen med Dougie! Very Happy

Gad vide hovrdan det går med 'the mom' Shocked

More soon (:

Aww. og så er det rigtig dedikeret til mig! xD

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Ons Jan 14, 2009 11:05 pm

Fantastisk Razz

- Du må simpelthen ikke stoppe, Ditte! Du skriver så godt!

Can't wait to read more (;

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Jan 17, 2009 1:49 pm

Det er virkelig godt Very Happy

glæder mig til mere . <3

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Feb 07, 2009 11:22 pm

Det er virkelig godt! Mere snart? Laughing

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Apr 17, 2010 9:28 pm

Ja, overvejer om jeg skal genoptage den her fiction.
hvis nogen stadig er med på at læse og kommentere den, så er jeg 100% klar til at skrive videre..
-ellers har jeg tænkt på om jeg skal omskrive den og ligge den ind på ny..
hvad siger i?
Nogen der er med på nogen af delene? :'D
Please let me know.

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Lør Apr 17, 2010 9:30 pm

Ja da

Jeg ville rigtig gerne læse videre cheers

Emne: Sv: Prøve; Famous Last Words Søn Apr 18, 2010 12:02 am

vil MEGET gerne læse mere Very Happy