Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 31 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Ons Dec 31, 2008 4:36 pm
Okay, Så i stedet for at lave et nyt topic hele tide, har jeg besluttet at lave en hvor jeg samler alle min S/A's. kommer nok også nogle Poem's. ;D Jeg takker Sidsel og Anne for ideen. Har den første klar og ligger den ind om to minutter. Håber at der er nogen der gider og læse + lægge nogle kommentar.
GODT NYTÅR
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 32 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Ons Dec 31, 2008 4:43 pm
Uh, det skal nok blive godt Det er altid en fornøjelse at læse det du skriver, Ditte (;
Godt nytår til dig, også!
Ditte Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 31 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Ons Dec 31, 2008 4:45 pm
Annesteg skrev:
Uh, det skal nok blive godt Det er altid en fornøjelse at læse det du skriver, Ditte (;
Godt nytår til dig, også!
Aww Tak ;i
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 32 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Ons Dec 31, 2008 4:47 pm
No problem (;
Ditte Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 31 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Ons Dec 31, 2008 4:53 pm
.... Okay her kommer den første. Vil lige advare, den er meget trist. Så den passer ikke lige ind til dagen i dag. Skal lige siges, at jeg har aldrig gjort det, men fik ideen da jeg har nogle veninder der har prombler. Så jeg synes det er rimlig relevant at skrive om + det er noget man kan relate to. Here we go.. ____________________________________________________________________________
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Blue eyed Tears.
Finding the scissors. Pressing it hard onto my arm. The blood is running, but making no harm.
My before so plain white shirt. Is now covered with red marks, the marks is my blood. The blood that pumps out of my dying heart.
White shirt in clean water. Wet blood on soft skin. Leaving no track of what have happened. So when he get in, all I wish for is to be thin.
Hurting people is what I do best, I cannot live a life without regret. You helped me feeling worthy to live this life. But am I worthy your tears? Cause all I tend to do, is to hurt you.
Everything hurts He tells me to eat more, He tells me that's why my body act this way But there is no way I'm going back Back to the fat me.
Escape the tears, the pain. Run away, but in some way I'd like to stay Because those eyes that pulls me back to live they have made me try to live life. I'm just afraid that they are full of lies.
I am your faunt, the fault, you never see your family anymore That your before so glowing eyes, now is worried and down. I'm sorry for what I've cost you.
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Synes i?
Stargirl Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 701 Age : 30 Location : Esbjerg Registration date : 29/11/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Ons Dec 31, 2008 4:58 pm
Jeg Synes den er god og den er trist :'/ Man kunne næsten lave en sang til den
I får også lige mit øje XD ! du har en flot øjen farve !
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 32 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Ons Dec 31, 2008 6:57 pm
Det var sindsygt godt, Ditte! Du skriver så smukt, får alle følelserne frem!
Bukker mig sgu i støvet for dig, (;
Ditte Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 31 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Tors Jan 01, 2009 4:34 pm
Aww, tak begge to. Betyder virkelig meget for mig..
McFlyLover<3 Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1357 Age : 30 Location : Lille skod by i nærheden af middelfart;) Registration date : 03/03/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Tors Jan 01, 2009 6:10 pm
Synes virkelig at det er godt, du får alle føelserne frem, Smukt!
Sidsel Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 932 Age : 32 Location : HHE Registration date : 30/12/07
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Tors Jan 01, 2009 10:00 pm
Uhh Ditte Det er virkelig smukt. Det er rigtig godt, føelserne kommer helt frem. Skide Godt (:
mcflys Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 883 Age : 31 Location : Silkeborg Registration date : 24/01/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Man Jan 05, 2009 3:49 pm
mega godt ! love it!
Miamcfly Surfer Babe
Antal indlæg : 190 Age : 30 Location : risskov, århus Registration date : 25/12/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Man Jan 05, 2009 4:03 pm
det er sygt godt!! gid jeg kunne skrive sådan noget
Ditte Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 31 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Tors Jan 08, 2009 5:51 pm
Tænkte på at det var på tide at lægge den næste ud, eftersom jeg er færdig med den.. håber at i alle samme kan li den!? Giv mig endelig din mening, det ville gøre mig monster glad. ;D Takker på forhånd (; __________________________________________________
Voice On The Radio
The light when down, a spot on the stage was making everyone's attention to the guy standing beside a chair with a guitar in his huge work hands. His curly hair was wet and if you looked really close at him, you would see the sweat hang like raindrops, one little move could cause it to fall down towards the big black ground below him. His big blue sparkling eyes, cut everyone's attention, they were like an endless ocean. The light would turn his eyes into two bright stars on a cloudless sky. He grinning sat down on the chair and went his fingers over the guitar, hearing the sound. "So how are you doing? Feel like Bob Dylan.... So I'm going to do an acoustic version, of a song I wrote on the first album" He paused and tuned his guitar, "But I'm gonna try to put a bit of the harmonica in it for you." He blew some air into the harmonica. "Are you ready? Here you go, you know this one!" He slowly started to play as the one massive spot turned into around ten, letting the light fall a little easier on him, he took a deep breath and let it out into the harmonica, letting the sound flew into the tone of the guitars light relaxing tunes. My belly froze into complete ice, I was shocked, stunned and amazed all in one time. from this distance, he could take my breath away, leave me standing speechless amazed over his great talent. His beautiful eyes were closed, only leaving the sweat and his long eyelashes, together with his huge cheeks full of air. He looked so peaceful, so gorgeous, like this truly was the place he belonged. Nothing else would or could compare with this experience that he was living through right now. The ice in my belly got melted, like when a girl got her first kiss, quickly and so painless, the sound of his voice was the cause. He was like a true angel. The crowd began to sing along, making the atmosphere unique, my eyes drifted of to the fans, there wasn't a single eye dry. The sweat in his hair was slowly dripping down on the black stage, and his left foot was restless tapping on the chair, while his body was working quietly in it's own moves to the music. His fingers stopped and his head was pulled away from the harmonica as if the song was finished, the crowd went wild, screaming, laughing, having the time of their life. As he pulled a smiled before his sang the last words. "But I'm not alone!" the screaming once again filled the air, "Thank you very much!" he ran his fingers over the guitar again, this time screaming himself. He then laughed, as all the lights went out and the crowd screamed even louder. I found myself, with my hand on my heart, and tears picking in my eyes, I shook the tears away. I turned around and looked at one of their fans, she was completely stunned, still looking at the stage, with her mouth open, wanting more, wanting the light to switch back on and he would come back in and kept playing. The voice on the radio, Danny Jones. The voice, everyone is falling in love with, but unfortunately he's untouchable. The stranger that you and I am falling deeply in love with. He's the voice that will always have a special place in my heart. My lovely beloved stranger.
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Hvad synes i så? håber at i kunne li' det, hehehe. Ved godt at den ikke er så lang, men det er jo ikke længden der tæller... vel? ;D
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 32 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Tors Jan 08, 2009 6:06 pm
- 10 minutter senere -
Ditte for pokker altså! Du har gjort det - igen igen! Fantastisk skrevet, det må jeg sige. Jeg er målløs! Du skriver sindssygt godt, og så lige Not Alone Live - Du kunne ikke have valgt en bedre sang (;
Fortsæt endelig med at skrive!
Sarah Miss Halloween
Antal indlæg : 477 Age : 32 Location : Esbjerg Registration date : 27/06/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Tors Jan 08, 2009 9:39 pm
Jeg synes det var ufatteligt godt! Virkelig godt. Jeg skal lige høre sangen nu! hehe. Ej du skriver altså virkelig godt, den var bare så sød. Kom endelig med flere af den slags.
McFlyLover<3 Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1357 Age : 30 Location : Lille skod by i nærheden af middelfart;) Registration date : 03/03/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Tors Jan 08, 2009 9:46 pm
Helt vildt fantastisk godt! Ser bare hele scenen for mig tror ikke det kunne skrives bedre..
Ditte Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 31 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Fre Jan 09, 2009 6:45 pm
Aww. Tusind tak alle sammen, det er virkelig dejligt at hører- ;D
Sidsel Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 932 Age : 32 Location : HHE Registration date : 30/12/07
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Fre Jan 09, 2009 11:31 pm
Wow Ditte det er virkelig godt. Det virkede bare SÅ ægte haha. Virkelig godt, Glæder mig til mere <3
Ditte Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 31 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Lør Feb 07, 2009 5:37 pm
Har lige fundet en gammel fic fra sidste år, som jeg er blevet såen halv færdig med. Den er for kort til at blive en rigtig fic, men for lang til at jeg synes at den kan blive kaldt standalone. Ville bare lige hører om der er nogen af jer piger der gider og læse og kommenter. for så vil jeg lægge den ind til jer. Heheh.. Nogen der vil læse?
Mille Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1784 Age : 30 Registration date : 06/09/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Lør Feb 07, 2009 5:40 pm
Selvfølgelig ! Jeg er på !
Sidsel Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 932 Age : 32 Location : HHE Registration date : 30/12/07
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Lør Feb 07, 2009 6:33 pm
Helt sikkert (: Glæder mig allerede hah
Ditte Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 904 Age : 31 Location : Sønderjylland. Registration date : 12/01/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Søn Feb 08, 2009 9:49 pm
SUUUUPER! Første add, kommer nok i starten af den kommende uge... håber i gider at vente og læse den.. ;D
Mille Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1784 Age : 30 Registration date : 06/09/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Søn Feb 08, 2009 10:07 pm
Self gør vi da det
Sara(: Miss Halloween
Antal indlæg : 325 Age : 30 Location : I mine bukser! Registration date : 11/01/09
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Man Feb 09, 2009 12:27 am
Altid!
McFlyLover<3 Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1357 Age : 30 Location : Lille skod by i nærheden af middelfart;) Registration date : 03/03/08
Emne: Sv: Ditte's Standalone's/Poem's Man Feb 09, 2009 12:32 am