A Falling Lover

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Okay piger, jeg er godt igang med en ficcle! Jeg har valgt at kalde den 'A Falling Lover'.
Den ligger også på refresh, hvor jeg har fået nogle go' feedback! og Sidsle synes jeg skulle ligge den her ind.
Så jeg håber at i alle er op for en ny fic?
lige så snart jeg får lidt respond jeg vil ligge prologuen ind! xD
Dittexx

uuuh - det lyder spændende

elsker titlen: a falling lover - mums

EDIT: har lige læst den inde på refresh - rigtig god prologue!

Glæder mig til at læse den

Det lyder rigtig godt, Ditte!

Glæder mig til at læse den

Mere please!

Det er rigtig godt, !
Du må gerne fortsætte for min skyld da (;

synes det er rigtig godt at du laver en fic fra den synesvinkel ! virkelig ! synes ofte fic'er bliver sådan noget Morten Korch agtigt noget ! det tyder super godt ! så mere snart ? xD

we jeg sagde jo det var en god ting haha
mere snart tak

Ja jeg synes skam også du skal blive ved (: Den lyder rigtig god.

Blev endelig ved!! Det lyder til at blive en rigtig god fic, og lidt anderledes end så mange andre..

God start xD Glæder mig til man kommer mere ind i den. (;
Keep on the good work.

Rigtig rigtig godt!. Elsker at du er blevet så god til at få følelser og beskrivelser med ind! skide godt arbejde

Ditte skrev:

Tak tøser, det er dejligt at få alt den feedback. I do really appreciate it! Det betyder meget for lysten til at skrive videre.

Line: Tak.. xD Jaa det er sket meget siden den første fic. Alt bliver bedre hen a vejen. Men har virkelig også skrevet meget fic her på det seneste!
Til alle jer andre som har sagt det med det anderledes, det var netop noget alla det jeg tænkte på, nu må vi bare se om det holder hele vejen.

Mere fic er på vej senere i aftern

Lyder godt

NYT ADD, NYT ADD.
I må meget undskylde, men jeg har ikke nogle lange chapters! håber at det ikke har den store betydning.
But here it is anyway!

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Chapter One; Seeing your face again.



"Hiii!" I said as I gently pressed my lips up on his, he smiled sweet to me and ran his fingers through my hair.
As we pull apart he took my hand and lead me into the living room.
"I finally found a birthday present for Amy!" He sighed happy and took a poster that was rolled together on the table.
"One McFly poster!" He said as he showed it to me.
My belly curled together as my eyes felt on Danny's face, I remember him like it was just yesterday, that he was mine.
"And a Danny Jones poster!" He said and grinned masive of his great found.

"T-that's great, hun!" I lied and faked a smile, he rolled them together again and kissed my forehead.
See, I found a great guy here in Bolton, Chris, he's twentyseven, and there is a couple of years between us, but h-he's so sweet to me, and on the other hand, age means nothing when it comes to love. right?
Chris also have a little girl called Amy, her birthday is in one week where she's going to turn six and lucky for me she loves McFly more like addicted, but mostly Danny Jones..

GREEEAT.

Here I was trying to skip out of any convo that would contain the word, McFly or Danny, and then this little girl that always talk about them, is my boyfriends daughter..

"Well, I'll be gone in just a few minutes so I'll see you tomorrow!" Chris said as I got his coat and the car keys on the kitchen table.
"I'll call you!" He said and walked into the bathroom where I was getting ready for work, he kissed the side of my head gently, and smiled before he left my flat shutting the door gently after him.

I got my red bike out of the hall and plucked my earphones into my ear.
Going to work was at times great, and really nice meeting new people, but when some men had enough to drink it gets a bit uncomfortable and I want to slap them, but I have to be friendly to everyone.
I put my bike at the back side of the pub and walked inside seeing Ally standing confused looking at the floor.
On the floor two glasses with beer is broken, and at the desk a few people is waiting for their food or drink.

"Heey!" I said as I walk inside.
"Just go to the desk and let me get that!" I said and got down to my knees taking up the big pieces of glass.
"Thank you!" Her voice cracked as she said it, so it sounded like she was really stressed.
"No problem at all!" I said grinning as I rubbed the floor clean.

The night went by slow! the minutes that passes seemed to be like hours, and on a friday night people would stream in.
"What's the time?" I asked Ally as I got a glass down from the shelf and poured some beer in it.
"21:53!" She groaned, that means that I have to be here two long stiff hours, plus some more since it was my turn to shut if all down.
I pushed a loose hair away from my face and balanced the beer over to the table.

"Ello. two coffés please!" A guy said to me as I passed him and a familiar dude which head looked like it was stuck on the table. I spin around and looked at him.
"Ehh. sure, e-mmm Anything else?" I said and got my block out smiling.
The guy looked at his mate, he slowly raised his head, his ocean blue eyes and curley hair, the masive hands and thin lips couldn't give me the same butterflies in my belly if it wasn't the Jones.
"Emm. I-I have to er.. go!"I said nervous as I nearly ran back to the desk to hide from him.

"What the heck are you doing?" Ally grinned at me as she looked down one me trying to look like a piece of the floor.
I pressed my finger to my lips, meaning 'shhh'.
"Look to the right!" I said while I pressed my body up against the desk, Ally turned her attention to Danny's table, her lips quick formed into a smile.
I fold my hand and hit her on her shinbone, not to hard.
"Ouch!"She groaned.
"Why did you do that!" She fallowed annoyed, I shook my head slightly and went slowly up from the floor making sure he didn't see me.
"You get more attention that way!" She said and rolled her eyes, I knew she was right, but I can't take any chances, as her best friend she has to know that.
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Fortæl mig din mening, alt er velkomme. xD

Det er skam rigtig godt!
Og helt vildt spændende, hehe
Jeg synes den er anderledes på en rigtig god måde, fortsæt endelig (:
Jeg glæder mig til mere.

ja , gerne mere snart xD

dejligt

meremeremere, pleeease ? :D

Det er rigtig godt !

rigtig godt, og det er også rigtig godt der er skrevet på en anderledens måde
mere snart please??

det er bare super

Ditte skrev:

Tak tøser, mere senere i aften eller i morgen tidligt. ;D

Uh, I can't wait!