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fantastisk !!!
du burde ligge syg hver dag !
jeg er også syg idag, kan bare ikke tage mig sammen til selv at skrive noget fic Razz
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Fantastisk afsnit, og lidt sørgeligt faktisk -.-
Men jeg kan ikke lade vær' med at smile lidt, for nu mangler vi bare Danny! (;

MERE! cheers
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rigtig godt heeh
havde lige tid til at læse det, da jeg OGSÅ ligger syg haah
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Rigtig godt xD mere snart. (;
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Her kommer et meget forsinket add. det må i meget undskylde!
Håber at i stadig gider og læse den, håber i kan tilgive mig? ;D


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Chapter six; Leav me alone and let me move on.


I hugged Ally. It had been a long day at work, we hadn't really had any customers as a monday evening nothing really happens. I put my hat on my head and pulled my mitten over my hands.
Going home to get a warm cup of tea, after all it's not hot outside in october.
I got the key out to my bike and stuck it in the lock looking at the tyre, completely flat! I throw my hands up in the air and kicked to the house not thinking.
"Fuck, shit, bullshit, moron, idiot, whore bike!" I said as I jumped on one foot, I sat down on the stairs and took the 'hurt' foot up and started to blow at it.

I took my bike and started walking home, I looked up in the air as small snowflakes was falling down, one snowflake landed on my nose and melted like butter on a hot pan.
The weather was so pleaceful, so beautiful.

"De?" someone said, no one had called me that since I moved from London and it freaked me out that someone would say it now, I wasn't happy about that name. It just brought back memories I'm try to forget.


Flashback


I swong my arms around his neck, feeling his warm embrace, it's been a months since I saw him and now he's here. I sliped my hand down over his chest and kissed his cheek softly.

"I love you, you know that right?" He said as he pulled out and smiled to me, I nodded, though it's been three months since he said that, but I would just stay in the belief of hope, because I did really love him and I hope that he loved me back.
"Yea... I do!" I said and bite down on my lip feeling his hands move down to my waist.
His lips moved and touched my forehead, before they moved down to my lips meeting in a slow and for me lovely kiss, I love the touch of his lips on my skin, they were so soft.

"I have to go!" He said and removed his lips from my lips.
My face took a quick turn, he had just got here...
"But.. why?" I asked as the sting in my eyes got worse and they started to tear up.
"De, I can't be with you all the time." He said and let his fingers through his straligh hair.
"I can't believe you!" I said and turned my back to him, I quickly wiped a tear away, making sure he didn't notice it. Before he let two hands on my shoulder and made me turn around.

"Haay it's my job! You don't want me to quit do you!" He said annoyed, so here we go again, we are going to have this stupid fight about him putting his job higher then me.
"Danny! just fuck off. Because if you don't I will.. You don't get it do you!? I love you so much, but I can't live like this, you treath me like shit, you just think you can do this and I'll always be here, I wont because, time after time you break my heart and leav it for the cleaning lady..!" I said and looked into his eyes ignoring the tears falling down my cheeks.

He lean his head back against the wall and closed his eyes. perfect time to go into your dream world.
"I'm sorry Dan, but at times I do get the felling that you're cheating on me. I just love you so much that I try to ignore that, maybe you don't see it but you must feel that I'm not happy." I said.

"all I can see is that something is wrong here!" He breathed.
"Yea Dan I'm so proud of you!" I said and walked out the the hall slamming the door behinde me.

"Heey Ditte!" Tom said as him and Dougie walked towards the house, they both stopped as they saw the look in my eyes and the weet cheeks.
"God you've changed woman!" Dougie said and snapped his fingers before Tom hit the back of his head.
"Walk inside moron!"He breathed at Dougie who did what he was told.

"What's wrong, you're... different."
"I'll see you when I see you! Talk to Danny, and you'll know the story!" I said and shook my head leaving to escaping more of Tom's quistions.


End of flashback.


I turned around and looked at Danny.
This was no used at all, so I turn around again ignoring him started to walk home again but he was fallwong me, I could hear his footsteps behinde me.
"Okay would you stop that! you're freaking me out!" I said and looked back at him, he walked a bit faster and came up beside me.

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Synes i?
Håber i kunne li' det ;D
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uuh dam da da dammmmm!!
haha rigtig godt glæder mig til mere. Very Happy
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du kan jo ikke ende det her ?
glææææder mig til mere Very Happy
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Virkelig godt Ditte ! Very Happy

Mere snart ! cheers
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Og så stopper du der? Shocked

Jeg må vide hvad der sker, Ditte. Please?
Det er vildt godt, kan rigtig godt lide den måde du skriver på! Very Happy
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Mega godt (; Og du skriver super godt!
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Tusind tak! ;D

Ups, det er længe siden at jeg had added sidst.. Surprised
Well, jeg har det næste add klar, så jeg LOVER at der kommer mere senere i dag!
skal bare lige have det læst igennem.

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NÆSTEEEN ADD! Very Happy

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Chapter seven; consider me as your staker.

"I can walk alone you know!" I said annoyed as Danny didn't seem to turn around and leav me alone.
I was soon home..
I don't want him to know where I live, after all he's a stalker.
"I know! I just wanna talk to you!" He said and grabed my frist so the bike felt down on the ground.
"What Danny, I think I made it very clear back then!" I said and pulled my hand back, he looked surprised.
"Erm, yeaa, I know!" He said and rubbed his neck, looking at the ground.
"my life was a living hell after you! 'cause you did still fill out my life. As much my heart said 'go back' my head said 'stay away, he's using you' and my head was right, you used me." I said and looked into his eyes.
"What can I say, I know I was a big moron!" He said looking up from the ground.
"Oh, you weren't just a moron dude! You were a idiot, a womanizer" I said and took my bike up from the ground.

"Yea, but I'm your cleaning lady!" he yelled after me as I was startet to walk again.
"Whaat?" I said and stopped.
"You said that time after time I broke your heart and left it for the cleaning lady! I'm that cleaning lady, your heart was always mine, I was just in disguise!" he said walking a few steps closer to me.
"Danny it's eleven fiftyfive! I smell of cigarettes, I can smell beer everywhere and you think I bother talking to you now?" I said and tried to ignore the things he just had said, cause in some way it made a expression on me.
He remembered it, but he would probably just had wrote it down and safed.
So he could charm me right into his arms again.

I stopped outside my bulding, Danny fallowed me all the way over here and I hadn't spoken a word to him since the cleaning lady thing.
I placed the bike in the hall and looked at Danny.
"If you don't speak to me, I'll be at your work everyday and fallow you home!" He sighed.
"That just to bad that you have to go back to London when the rock life calls again eh?" I said and laughed.
"Ditte.. you just got yourself a stalker." He said in a serious voice.
"So I've noticed! Byyyye Daaaeeeeeey!" I said and walked up the stairs to my flat.
As I came inside I looked outside.
On the road a thin layer of snow was laying and the snowflaks was falling down over the town as a duvet.
I watched Danny on the street he was looking up at the building for the lights in my flat I suppose.
He catched my stare and waved before he spin around and started to walk towards the pub again.

Time for a looooong warm bath!

The water wasn't hot it was more likely to be called lunkewarm.
I didn't care, I let the water stream down on my tired body, making me relax and making me think about everything that just was coming flashing back to my life.
The phone started to bime like a animale, I stepped out, dripping wet and wrapped a towl thigt around my body, tiptoeing for no reason.

"eay?" I said down the phone trying to avoid my hair dripping on it.
The phone in the other end was dead, no one was there, I came to late.

For a week Danny stood outside the pub everynight!
It was starting to get hardere and hardere not to say a word to him, and I had to walk, I still hadn't got my tire fixed. Maybe Danny was the reason that I didn't fix it, I quit enjoyed having him here again.
"What can I do to make you stop stalking me?" I said as I spin around outside my building.
"invite me in and talk everything through" he answered.
I laughed, into my flat? no way, I live in a shiithole comparative to him.
I shook my head.
"Then come with me, I'll cook for you!" he said after my refusal.
"I've tastest your food, and you can not cook!"I said grinning.
"Maybe another time Danny!" I said and oped the door, smiling at him before I closed the door behinde me again.

This can't be healthy, he still spin me around.

As I stepped out of the pub, Dannys faces wasn't there, he was nowhere, I knew it, they had to have him back sooner or later I thought as I stuck my hands deep down in my pockets, I just didn't hope that it had to be so soon.
"Eaayy! It's freezing!" Dannys voice said, I turned around and noticed a big black BMW on the parking lot.
"oh, you've noticed?" I said and keept walking.
"Jump in and I'll drive you home!?"He yelled and started the engine.
"You can't be good for me!" I said as I sat down in his warm and comfortable car.
"I know!" he said "I good, right?" He fallowd up cheeky.
I shook my head and smiled looking out on the road.

"eaaa! mate you should had turned to the right there!" I said and got up from the seat.
"I'm cooking for you, today! nothing you do or say will make me turn around and drive you home before you've tastest my food!" He said and took his eyes of the road.
"But. You don't have a flat here, you don't live here!" I sighed and throw my hands up in the air.
"There's a lot you don't know!" He said and stopped at a red light.




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ej hvor er det altså godt !
mere snart ! Wink
det er så smukt skrevet Very Happy
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Jep det er helt super xD glæder mig til næste og er spændt på om Danny kan finde ud af at lave mad? Shocked Razz
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rigtig godt Ditte
glæder mig til mere Very Happy
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Skide godt xD
Glæder mig til at høre om Danny's fantastiske madlavning ! Very Happy <3
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Tak allesammen.

Mere fic imorgen? ;D
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Ditte skrev:
Tak allesammen.

Mere fic imorgen? ;D

YAAAAY ! Very Happy
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mmdc94 skrev:
Ditte skrev:
Tak allesammen.

Mere fic imorgen? ;D

YAAAAY ! Very Happy
nu skal jeg (og nok også mille da hun er tosset nok til det)
svømme rundt i moste jordbær med syltetøj i navlen og synge højt af glæde !
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MeusDeus skrev:
mmdc94 skrev:
Ditte skrev:
Tak allesammen.

Mere fic imorgen? ;D

YAAAAY ! Very Happy
nu skal jeg (og nok også mille da hun er tosset nok til det)
svømme rundt i moste jordbær med syltetøj i navlen og synge højt af glæde !

I er da nogle skører bananer.
Skal nok ikke komme fra mig, da jeg også selv er skør nok til at gøre.. Masser af ting.
-.-

Sorry, kommer ikke noget i dag, men i morgen? Embarassed
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Ditte skrev:
MeusDeus skrev:
mmdc94 skrev:
Ditte skrev:
Tak allesammen.

Mere fic imorgen? ;D

YAAAAY ! Very Happy
nu skal jeg (og nok også mille da hun er tosset nok til det)
svømme rundt i moste jordbær med syltetøj i navlen og synge højt af glæde !

I er da nogle skører bananer.
Skal nok ikke komme fra mig, da jeg også selv er skør nok til at gøre.. Masser af ting.
-.-

Sorry, kommer ikke noget i dag, men i morgen? Embarassed
der røg syltetøjet !
så svømemr jeg bare i jordbør istedet for .
hvorsna tror i egentlig det følels ?
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MeusDeus skrev:
Ditte skrev:
MeusDeus skrev:
mmdc94 skrev:
Ditte skrev:
Tak allesammen.

Mere fic imorgen? ;D

YAAAAY ! Very Happy
nu skal jeg (og nok også mille da hun er tosset nok til det)
svømme rundt i moste jordbær med syltetøj i navlen og synge højt af glæde !

I er da nogle skører bananer.
Skal nok ikke komme fra mig, da jeg også selv er skør nok til at gøre.. Masser af ting.
-.-

Sorry, kommer ikke noget i dag, men i morgen? Embarassed
der røg syltetøjet !
så svømemr jeg bare i jordbør istedet for .
hvorsna tror i egentlig det følels ?

Vil gætte på.
ubehageligt.
Fedtet.
Klamt.
og alligevel.
''blødt''

Razz
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Lige mine ord Razz ^
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Anne skrev:
Lige mine ord Razz ^


whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt
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Anne skrev:
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whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt
hmm altså det er ikke syltetøj vi snakker om.
men frisk plukkede jordbær...
tror faktisk ikke det er fedtet igen ! Very Happy
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