A Falling Lover

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 07, 2008 9:38 pm

MeusDeus skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:: Lige mine ord ^

whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt

hmm altså det er ikke syltetøj vi snakker om.
men frisk plukkede jordbær...
tror faktisk ikke det er fedtet igen ! Very Happy

Det bliver det jo!
Man vil nok mase dem, så bliver det jo automatisk fedtet.
ikk? Wink

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 07, 2008 9:39 pm

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:: Lige mine ord ^

whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt

Haha, det kunne være sjovt hvis han var med til det Razz

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 07, 2008 9:40 pm

Ditte skrev:

MeusDeus skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:: Lige mine ord ^

whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt

hmm altså det er ikke syltetøj vi snakker om.
men frisk plukkede jordbær...
tror faktisk ikke det er fedtet igen ! Very Happy

Det bliver det jo!
Man vil nok mase dem, så bliver det jo automatisk fedtet.
ikk? Wink

naah ? der er rimlig meget vand i jordbær.. ? men jo hvis der er lidt varmt så vander fordamper og der kun er jordbær snask tilbage må det jo blive fedtet Razz

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 07, 2008 9:42 pm

Anne skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:: Lige mine ord ^

whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt

Haha, det kunne være sjovt hvis han var med til det Razz

Arh, drømmer.
Ville blive hilarious! Hahahah. xD

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 07, 2008 9:47 pm

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:: Lige mine ord ^

whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt

Haha, det kunne være sjovt hvis han var med til det Razz

Arh, drømmer.
Ville blive hilarious! Hahahah. xD

ej okay fik lige et meget forkert billede inde i hovedet :s

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 07, 2008 9:51 pm

MeusDeus skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:: Lige mine ord ^

whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt

Haha, det kunne være sjovt hvis han var med til det Razz

Arh, drømmer.
Ville blive hilarious! Hahahah. xD

ej okay fik lige et meget forkert billede inde i hovedet :s

Haha, ikke på den måde ;D
But I wouldn't mind it!
Anytime Dougie (; Hahahaha xD

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 1:43 pm

Ditte skrev:

MeusDeus skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:: Lige mine ord ^

whaay..
Men ville sgu gerne gøre det hvis jeg kunne få Dougie med! xD
Ellers ville jeg nok tænke en gang mere over det, inden jeg hopper ned i det.
Nahhm, Dejligt

Haha, det kunne være sjovt hvis han var med til det Razz

Arh, drømmer.
Ville blive hilarious! Hahahah. xD

ej okay fik lige et meget forkert billede inde i hovedet :s

Haha, ikke på den måde ;D
But I wouldn't mind it!
Anytime Dougie (; Hahahaha xD

Hvad med vi bare tager dem alle fire med ? Very Happy

Mmmm...
Danny i badebukser... Twisted Evil

Frækkert !!!! Very Happy

Men ved ikk om jordbær er det der ser frækkest ud til ham ?

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 10:40 pm

Hvad med vi bare tager dem alle fire med ? :D
Mmmm...
Danny i badebukser... :twisted:
Frækkert !!!! :D

Men ved ikk om jordbær er det der ser frækkest ud til ham ? [/quote]

Dougie i g-streng :P

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 10:42 pm

Er der overhovedet nogen der læser mere? ;O

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 10:43 pm

jaaa!
det er nemmerlig rigtig godt!!! Very Happy

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 10:45 pm

Ditte skrev:: Er der overhovedet nogen der læser mere? ;O

Ja da!!

Det er jo vildt godt, ikke lige en fic man sådan opgir Razz

Mere snart?

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 10:47 pm

Anne skrev:

Ditte skrev:: Er der overhovedet nogen der læser mere? ;O

Ja da!!

Det er jo vildt godt, ikke lige en fic man sådan opgir Razz

Mere snart?

Ville bare lige hører om i ville have at jeg skulle add.
For gider ikk rigtig at lægge noget ind hvis ingen læser.
Men..
Kommer mere i aften! hvis der er flere der vil læse. Razz

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 10:51 pm

Ditte skrev:

Anne skrev:

Ditte skrev:: Er der overhovedet nogen der læser mere? ;O

Ja da!!

Det er jo vildt godt, ikke lige en fic man sådan opgir Razz

Mere snart?

Ville bare lige hører om i ville have at jeg skulle add.
For gider ikk rigtig at lægge noget ind hvis ingen læser.
Men..
Kommer mere i aften! hvis der er flere der vil læse. Razz

Jeg vil meget gerne læse mere! Very Happy

Bring it on, girl!
- Haha, sorry. Lille flip!

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 11:17 pm

Jeg vil også gerne læse mere!
bare kom med det! ;D

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 11:21 pm

haha ja undskyld vi kom vist lige ind på et andet emne !
og ja for gudsskyld !!! IKKE DROP DEN !
du er genial til det med fic'er :D
så mere snart ville være rigtig lækkert :D

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 11:28 pm

Okay, dejligt at hører.
Her kommer der mere til jer tre dejlige mennesker. Håber i kan lig det.

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Chapter eight; I knew it couldn't be true.

Danny killed the engine and looked up at a huge buliding, as we both got out of the car he pointed at a window in the middle of the building.
"There!" He said and walked up to the door and stuck a key in, I fallowed him up the stairs I think that I had to lift my feet round five hundred times before we finally got to the flat.
"it's nothing special, just a flat I bought to have some privat once in a while." He said and opend the door.
the flat was around twice as big as mine and had fancy things in it.

Danny was right, he did cook me dinner, and I did eat it.
One thing I can say is that he was a bit better, but burned food doesn't taste good in my mouth.
"Okay, I only agreed on this because we could speak about our past, okay?" I said as I had finished my plate and lied to him, saying that it tastest rather good.
"Yea. I don't have a speech. I just wanna say that I am really sorry for the things I did to you, I knew that you got hurt but it... just didn't matter back then. Until I saw you in the pub about a month and a half ago!" He finished and took a sip of his beer.

"Yea. me too, you've always been in my head but I keept pushing you out, but thougs dahm posters of you are everywhere. I'm really sorry that I told our story to the newspaper, but I just wasn't thinking clear." I explainted and rubbed my head.
"I know that this is hard on you, but it is on me too. Should we just say that we are even and stay friends or something... I don't wanna loose you again..." He said and got up from the chair placing the plates in the dishwasher.
"Come with me and I'll show you around in my little fancy flat!" He said and took my hand.
All the way through the tour of his flat he never once let my hand fall, his hand was diffrent from how I remembered it. They were so huge that my hand was like a puppets, they were rough, in a good way, they were work hands.

He let my hand fall as we reached his bedroom.
that was the only place you could see that a man atucally lived here, there was posters lined up on the walls in a unorganized manner and the curtains were still dragged over the windows, his bed were huge and looked extremly comfortable.
it was half made and slept in state.
There was a mirror on the wall across the bed, I turned to Danny, he had a massive grin on his face.
"That's kinky!" I said and grinned cheeky before I walked further into the room.

I looked at the wall and gave all the posters a glance, mostly 'the boss' aka Bruce Springsteen.
and the who, was smashed onto the walls.
Danny walked up behinde me and as stupid as I were, I just thought that he was reading my shoulder until he placed his hands on my hips, my gaze froze in my chest.
"I really am sorry," he whispered between my neck and ear.
His hands moved onto my waist before they circled around and rested against my stomach.
We stood like that for a minute, his arms embracing me and his head positioned awkwardly around my neck.
I feel his lips pressed under my ear made my entire body melted.
It was a good thing he was holding me, because I think my knees would crack under me if he ever let me go.

"This isn't right" I breathed out.
My eyes were closed as it took concentration to even talk.
"But you're liking it!" Danny said devilishly, and he turned me around so that I was facing him.
He knew me, I would give up. Those fucking eyes. I swear to God, they’re going to kill me one day.

I was against the wall before I knew it and my head was touching the mirror but Danny was pressing my body against the wall so hard that I had rest my hand on it, so it wouldn't fall down.
We kissed like we’d never get enough of each other, I didn’t plan on getting him out of his shirt, but it happend and god, I've missed it.
The muscles of his upper arms, his shoulders, his chest, his abs.
My hands went everywhere on his overbody, desperate to touch every inch they could because they weren’t sure if they’d get the opportunity again, maybe my brain would stop me.

It was when Danny backed me into his dresser that things shook and we knocked a picture down, normally it would matter at all, but this one caught my attention.
I pulled my body away from his and bend down and picked up the pitcure up from the floor, the glass was broken, but the pitcure was untouched.
Danny started to kiss my neck again but this time I pulled away and looked at the pitcure.
I quickly pulled my shirt on again.
On the picture Danny and a girl was sitting on a fancy club. Whoever this girl was, she was beautiful..
natural beauty, she had a huge happy and amazing smile glued on her lips and her eyes were dark blue dancing as the light hit them.
Her blonde straight hair was hanging perfect across her face, and her tanned skin made the last thing, that not only finished her beauty but made her look so perfect.
And Danny was sitting next to her his arm was resting on her shoulder and just as her, he had a smiled glued onto his face, his frenckled body was boiling red, he looked happier then I've even seen him sitting next to her.

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Hvad synes i?
Twisted Evil

eller

fortæl mig endelig hvad i synes? I love you

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Dec 08, 2008 11:48 pm

SKIDE GODT ALTSÅ !!!!
mere snart VIRKELIG SNART PLEASE ?!

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Tirs Dec 09, 2008 12:39 am

åj det er altså virkelig godt Very Happy

Glæder mig til mere. hehe

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Tirs Dec 09, 2008 12:31 pm

NOOO!!!

Du kan ikke bare stoppe der! Hvem pokker er hun?!
Det har bare ikke at være en kæreste?

Det er sindsygt godt, Ditte. Jeg glæder mig så meget til mere! Razz

Mere rigtig snart! XD

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 14, 2008 6:15 pm

Den er fic, er ved at kede mig lidt.
Hvis i ved havd jeg mener?
så jeg har tænkt mig, at jeg snart laver en ende på den.
men, her er næste add.
det er ikk godt, men håber i kan leve med det?

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Chapter nine; Why, How, When?

I brushed my finger across her face,
and saw Danny's long arms work out a way and took the picture out of my hands, he groaned loudly and sat down on his huge bed.
"Her name is Olivia!" He breathed and placed the picture on his bed sidetable.
"Is she your girlfriend?" I asked, not being able to look into his eyes, he buried his head into his hands.
"In a way!" he answered.
"What do you mean, either she is, or she isn't!" I said mad,
but did I have the right to be mad? she had the right to be mad, she wouldn't appreciate it, I'm sure.
"It's more complicated then that!"
"Is she here, in Bolton?" I asked, Danny sighed and nodded,
it took me five seconds to gather all my stuff and run down the staris.

"Ditte wait!" Danny yelled after me, I heard his footsteps behinde me going even fastere then mine.
He cheated and jumped right infront of me as I reached the bottom of the stairs.

"I'm-" He started but I cut him off.
"Sorry would be the right thing to say!" I said and went straight out of the door in a hurry.
"Where are you going?" He yelled from behinde.
"Home!" I said and spin arouns throwing my hands up in the air.
"But I drove you here!" He called, shiit, I never thought of that.
"Well I'll just have to walk wont I, it's quit normal!" I said and walked around the cornor.

It had been a week since mine and Danny's hot little conflict had happend, and my brain is completely shut down!
I'm tired all the time because I never get sleep and Chris came to see me two days ago!
He wasn't making it any easier on me, saying that he and Amys mum got back together and that all four of them
- Chris, Amy, her mum and Chris mum.
was going on a trip out for a couple of days. He said it grinning right up in my face, what a fucker.

My phone was dancing across the table as I watched MTV, I pressed on the green buttom and got the phone up to my ear.

"Yea?" I said.
"Ditte!" My mum said worried.
"Mum? are you okay?" I said as her voice was cracking and sounded like she had been crying.
"It's... it's.... Chris!" She cried out.
"What about Chris, we broke up mum.!" I said, she couldn't possibly already had forgotten that.
"They were in a carcrash!" She sobbed.
".....What?" I said loud and pulled my free hand up to my head.
"His mum is dead and Chris and his girlfriend are in coma!" she breathed.
I could hear her trying to breathe in and out slowly.
"What about Amy!" I said worried for the poor little girl not giving the other three a thought, she had to be alright!
"She's on the hospital too... on intensive care... I don't know if she's going to make it!"
"I'm on my way! I have to be with that little girl!" I said and hug up not giving a shit that it was raining outside,
and that the wind was like a slap on my face.

I reached the hospital all weet, but that didn't matter.
I walked up to the information desk.
"Amy ellasoon!" I said breathless, the lady infront of me looked smiling at me and turned her head down to the laptop,
I tripped my fingers on the desk, this couldn't go any slower could it?
"Room 186!" the lady said.
I nodded and thanked her, running down the hall to finde the right door.
I opend the door slowly finding Amy's little head and beautiful brow hair in the big white room,
the white colour made me feel blind, I closed the door behinde me and pulled a chair over to the bed.
I took her little hand up in mine.

"You're going to make it baby, I know you're.. You're so strong!" I said and wiped a tear away from my eyes.
I sat at her bed all night, just waiting for a sign showing that she'll be alright.
I woke up by a little soft knock on the door, I rubbed my eyes and looked at the door as it opend slowly.
"How is she?" The familiar voice said, I placed my head back down on the bed and sighed.
"How did you know I was here?" I asked, not moving my head. "How did you know this happend?"I sobbed.
"Your mum!" I felt a hand on my back trying to comfort me.

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Synes i`?
alle meninger er velkommen ;D

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 14, 2008 6:25 pm

Det er rigtig godt! Very Happy

Ærgeligt at du slutter den måske -.-

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 14, 2008 6:34 pm

uuh rigtig godt,
men aveligt at du slutter den ):

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 14, 2008 7:27 pm

ej hvor er det godt !
bliver helt rørt :P

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Søn Dec 14, 2008 10:11 pm

Super godt (;

Emne: Sv: A Falling Lover Man Feb 09, 2009 3:59 pm

Rigtig godt! Glæder mig til næste kap.. Very Happy

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