Antal indlæg : 883 Age : 30 Location : Silkeborg Registration date : 24/01/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 07, 2008 2:31 pm
ja det er super godt :b mere snart.
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 07, 2008 2:40 pm
mcflys skrev:
ja det er super godt :b mere snart.
Tak tak efter 'planen' får I mere på onsdag, på min fødselsdag, haha
Sarah Miss Halloween
Antal indlæg : 477 Age : 31 Location : Esbjerg Registration date : 27/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 07, 2008 3:22 pm
Årh godt afsnit - Slutningen var helt perfekt, haha. Jeg glæder mig til mere annesteg.
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 07, 2008 3:32 pm
sarahXlovesXmcfly skrev:
Årh godt afsnit - Slutningen var helt perfekt, haha. Jeg glæder mig til mere annesteg.
Haha, det var godt Og mange tak
McFlyLover<3 Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1357 Age : 29 Location : Lille skod by i nærheden af middelfart;) Registration date : 03/03/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 07, 2008 4:50 pm
Synes også det var rigtig godt skrevet, og glæder mig til mere !!!
NannaBoelt Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1092 Age : 31 Location : Roskilde Katedralskole Registration date : 03/05/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 07, 2008 10:39 pm
theirstargirl skrev:
Dannys-Princess skrev:
Rigtig godt skrevet .. Og virkelig godt afsnit ..
Iih, mange tak
Tillykke på onsdag så , hvis jeg lige glemmer at sige det der ..
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Man Sep 08, 2008 5:29 pm
Dannys-Princess skrev:
theirstargirl skrev:
Dannys-Princess skrev:
Rigtig godt skrevet .. Og virkelig godt afsnit ..
Iih, mange tak
Tillykke på onsdag så , hvis jeg lige glemmer at sige det der ..
Haha mange tak
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Ons Sep 10, 2008 6:08 pm
Her kommer næste afsnit (i anledning af min fødselsdag) Hope you like it ..
Chapter 4
Hannah was walking down the hallway, on her way to class. The though of Harry in front of her house, staring at her, wouldnt leave Hannahs head. Why was he standing in front of her house? Even worse, he had seen her dancing. Well, he had seen her dance before, but at that time she hadnt let go and just danced what she felt. She had done that yesterday evening, when he saw her through the window. When she dances alone, she lets go of her feelings. Hannah was walking in her own little world, and suddenly she bumped into something. Ouch! she gasped, as the books she held were being pushed into her stomach. Im so sorry.. she heard someone say. Hannah looked up and was met by a pair of piecing blue eyes, Harrys. She quickly looked down at her feet and kept on walking. Hey, are you okay? Harry asked as Hannah walked away. She didnt answer him, she just kept walking.
Shit, that was just a great start of the day. Walking directly into Hannah! Harry was a little confused, why was she just ignoring him? Harry decided to talk to Hannah when they had to dance. That was his favourite moment of the day, when he got to spend almost two hours dancing with Hannah. The days just couldnt pass by any slower. Finally, it was time for the days dance lessons. Harry walked in to the gym and waited around for Hannah to meet him at their usual dance spot. There was five minutes to they had to start, but Hannah hadnt showed up. Harry was getting nervous. Where was she? Why wasnt she coming? Was it because they bumped into each other earlier? Harry got desperate, where was Hannah? She couldnt just stay away from him, he needed her. He broke up with his girlfriend for her. She was his favourite moment of the day. It wouldnt be the same without her. Harry turned around, looking for Hannah. Suddenly the door opened and she entered. Harrys jaw dropped a little. She looked amazing. She was wearing denim shorts, a yellow top and black high heels. Harry had never seen her wearing high heels before. Hi She said, again like she had better things to do. Hey Harry answered, Look Im sorry about earlier. I wasnt paying attention and.. Hey, its alright. I wasnt either! Okay everyone! Natasha yelled and clapped her hands. Lets get started. First of all, Im glad to see, that almost all girls are wearing high heels. Its important that you learn how to dance in them, because you are going to do that at the show.
Hannahs face grew into a smile, just thinking about the show. She was really exited about it. Especially when she found out that there was going to be a father/daughter dance. That was the dance they were going to practice today.
The lesson went by really fast and soon Hannah was on her way home. She put her earplugs in and one of her favourite songs started. She was walking down the street, with her bag over her shoulder and her high heels in her hand. Even though Hannah loved walking in high heels, her feet hurt from dancing and now she was walking barefooted. Suddenly she had a feeling that someone was behind her, and as she turned around she saw Sydney running towards her. Hannah pulled out one of her earplugs and greeted Sydney. Hey Syd! Hannah smiled. Hi sweets Sydney answered, trying to catch her breath. What are you doing tonight? Uhm, I was planning on just doing my homework. Why? Well, Jasons friend is having a party and- Look Hannah interrupted. Im not going to your twin brothers friends party. Why, its gonna be fun. And we deserve to have fun. Youve been working your butt off last year, YOU deserve to have fun! Yeah, Im going to again this year. Hannah insisted. She wasnt really into these parties. People just get drunk and then sick. She couldnt really see the fun part anywhere. Whatever! Sydney sighed, kind of ignoring Hannahs answer. Im picking you up at 8 oclock. Sure you will Hannah sighed. Ill see you then She said sarcastically. You will, bye Sydney said and sent her a big smile.
Hannah was sitting in her room, she had just finished her homework and it wasnt even 7 pm yet. She was thinking about what Sydney had said; maybe she did deserve to have fun. Hannahs phone beeped, which meant that someone had texted her.
Sweets, youve got an hour before Im coming and you better be ready! Im serious; Im picking you up and dragging you to the party! Now, get up, get dressed and look hot!
Hannah laughed at the last comment. Well, I better get dressed she thought to herself and walked towards her closet. After a half an hour of trying to find something to wear, Hannah finally decided on a short dark blue dress, and her high heels. She kept her hair down and it curled perfectly down her back. She kept her make-up light, but she was wearing more than her usual mascara. At precisely 8 oclock the door bell rang, and Hannah knew it was Sydney.
Antal indlæg : 1357 Age : 29 Location : Lille skod by i nærheden af middelfart;) Registration date : 03/03/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Ons Sep 10, 2008 6:58 pm
Godt sfsnit som sædvanligt mere snart..
TILLYKKE MED FØDSELSDAGEN
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Ons Sep 10, 2008 7:00 pm
McFlyLover<3 skrev:
Godt sfsnit som sædvanligt mere snart..
TILLYKKE MED FØDSELSDAGEN
Mange tak
MeusDeus Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1026 Age : 30 Location : Århus Registration date : 01/09/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Ons Sep 10, 2008 10:40 pm
TILLYKKE ! XD nej hvor er det godt ! glæder mig til mere xD
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Ons Sep 10, 2008 10:50 pm
MeusDeus skrev:
TILLYKKE ! XD nej hvor er det godt ! glæder mig til mere xD
Tak tak
Sarah Miss Halloween
Antal indlæg : 477 Age : 31 Location : Esbjerg Registration date : 27/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Ons Sep 10, 2008 10:58 pm
TILLYKKE MED FØDSELSDAGEN SMUKKE! - Haha, men jeg har jo alleredet ønsket dig tillykke og givet dig gave og det hele <3
Det er et rigtig godt afsnit ! Jeg glæder mig til mere (; hehe. - Jeg elsker når man får lov at se tøjet, haha.
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Tors Sep 11, 2008 8:21 am
sarahXlovesXmcfly skrev:
TILLYKKE MED FØDSELSDAGEN SMUKKE! - Haha, men jeg har jo alleredet ønsket dig tillykke og givet dig gave og det hele <3
Det er et rigtig godt afsnit ! Jeg glæder mig til mere (; hehe. - Jeg elsker når man får lov at se tøjet, haha.
Tusind tak Og ja, har du jo. Den er bare en super fin gave, jeg elsker den
Og ja, det gør det hele mere virkeligt med tøjet synes jeg Godt at du/I kan lide den
NannaBoelt Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1092 Age : 31 Location : Roskilde Katedralskole Registration date : 03/05/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Tors Sep 11, 2008 11:30 am
Rigtig godt afsnit .. ;P
mcflys Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 883 Age : 30 Location : Silkeborg Registration date : 24/01/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Tors Sep 11, 2008 6:18 pm
Ja rigtig godt afsnit. (: Mere snart. XD
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 12:53 pm
Så kommer næste afsnit til jer
Chapter 5
The music was banging out the speakers, which made the whole house bounce from the sound of the bass. Drunken people were lying around the house as Harry was passing by. Why was he even here? Stopping for a second just to think about the situation, he convinced himself that he would go home; maybe do some of his homework. Hey mate! he heard someone say behind him. Harry turned around at saw Charlie, one of his best friends. How are you doing? He asked, holding tight on to the table beside him. Well, at least someone is having fun, Harry though to him self. Hey mate! Im fine. But Im just gonna go now. I have.. Stuff at home.. he said, thinking about an excuse to leave the party. Well, arent you a little boring? Charlie said, and took a large sip of his beer. Yeah, I guess I am. Harry sighed and turned around, walking towards the door. When he was a few steps from the door, it swung open at new people entered. Harry didnt recognise the girl, but the boy beside her was the one from detention. The one who was playing the guitar, Harry didnt know his name. Come on! the girl yelled, apparently to someone outside. Its gonna be fun! she smiled widely and made her way inside. The door closed for a second before reopening, a nervous looking girl stepped inside. Harrys heart skipped a beat and he immediately decided that his homework could wait.
Hannah stepped inside, letting her eyes scan the room. Suddenly she froze; right there in the middle, was Harry. Why would he be there? Come on! an impatiently Sydney yelled. Here she said, offering Hannah a beer. Hannah went further inside the house and tried to ignore the fact that Harry was there too. For some reason she didnt like that he was everywhere she went, like he was stalking her. Sydney! Hannah yelled, trying to shout down the music. What? she yelled just as loud. Harrys here. Hannah said nervously. Sydney knew how Hannah felt about Harry being around. For some reason Hannah didnt like him. Hey, just ignore him and have a good time. She smiled widely and went to find Tom. Hannah knew that Sydney was right, why worry about Harry? It wasnt like she liked him or anything; he was just a regular guy from her class. Hannah took a sip of her beer and went in to the living room where people were dancing. She sat on a free chair in the corner of the room, just observing people and drinking her beer. Suddenly someone caught her eye. He was looking at her from the other side of the room, and then got up, walking towards her. Hey Hannah.. He said, smiling. Hi.. Hannah replied, but instead of chatting with him, she got up leaving him kind of stunned.
What did I do wrong? Harry thought to himself as he watched Hannah walk away, drinking the rest of her almost full beer. He had just convinced himself to go talk to her; he wouldnt be doing anything wrong. He didnt have a girlfriend anymore and Hannah was his dance partner. Harry decided to go find her. He had plan, and he was going to stick to it. He walked around the house, trying to find her. It wasnt an easy thing, since there were people everywhere. Suddenly he caught her eye; she was standing talking to her friends. Hannah! he yelled, trying to shout down the music. She didnt hear him, Harry moved closer, putting a hand on her shoulder as he reached her. Hannah? He asked again.
Hannah jumped a little in shock, after feeling the hand of her shoulder. She turned around quickly, facing Harry. She felt dizzy, turning around too fast. She had drunken more beer than she was used to (which wasnt much, since she wasnt a party person). What? she asked, looking at him. Do you wanna dance? Harry asked, looking into her blue eyes. Sure, why not? She said, walking to the dance floor. She only did this to get rid of him, thinking that if she didnt he would be following her all night! Just as they entered the floor, a new song started. The whisper of Justin Timberlake was heard though the room:
Just something about you the way I'm lookin at you whatever
Hannah took Harrys hand, turned around, facing him.
You keep lookin at me..
Just as the line was heard, Hannah looked right into Harrys eyes with a look she had never sent a guy before. Only she didnt know what she was doing. Apparently the alcohol was getting to her head. Making her do stuff, she would never dream of.
'Your gettin scared now, right? Don't fear me baby, it's just Justin It feel good right? Listen
Hannah started swaying to the music, not really noticing how people where looking at her. Her moves made everyone around them look. She was a good dancer, but Hannah didnt really know it herself. She just loved to dance, hear the musics rhythm and move to the sound. It made her feel free and the world around her would disappear.
As more people were entering the party, and the house got more crowded, Hannah and Harry kept on dancing. They got closer and as the music changed again, this time to a slow song. Hannah put her arms around Harrys neck, leaning her head against his shoulder. Harrys inside were flipping. They had never danced like this. His heart was pounding, but he pulled himself together, and wrapped his arms around her waist, pulling her a little closer. Hannah stopped for a second, realizing how close they were dancing. She lifted her head, looking right into Harry blue eyes. They met in a gaze. This is it, Harry thought as he slowly leaned closer to Hannah. They lips were only inches from each other, and Harry could feel Hannahs breath on his skin. What the hell, do you think youre doing?! A familiar voice asked.
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Hvad siger I så ?
McFlyLover<3 Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1357 Age : 29 Location : Lille skod by i nærheden af middelfart;) Registration date : 03/03/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 1:43 pm
Rigtig rigtig godt! Hmm, hvem er det der har den dårligste timing i verden?! (For det er da ikke Hannah selv er det?) Glæder mig til mere!!
-Du fik min nr. 400 kommentar
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 1:49 pm
McFlyLover<3 skrev:
Rigtig rigtig godt! Hmm, hvem er det der har den dårligste timing i verden?! (For det er da ikke Hannah selv er det?) Glæder mig til mere!!
-Du fik min nr. 400 kommentar
Ja, det er jo ikke godt at vide, hvem der afbryder dem? Godt at du kan lide den
Jeg er meget beæret over at få kommentar nr. 400, haha
Sarah Miss Halloween
Antal indlæg : 477 Age : 31 Location : Esbjerg Registration date : 27/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 3:55 pm
Årh det er et godt afsnit ! - Jeg tror det er Harrys gamle kæreste der afbryder dem, men nu får vi at se, hehe. det er i hvert fald rigtig godt. Fortsæt på denne super måde smukke.
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 3:59 pm
sarahXlovesXmcfly skrev:
Årh det er et godt afsnit ! - Jeg tror det er Harrys gamle kæreste der afbryder dem, men nu får vi at se, hehe. det er i hvert fald rigtig godt. Fortsæt på denne super måde smukke.
Tusind tak, søde Ja, det bliver sørme spændende at høre hvem det er (;
Sarah Miss Halloween
Antal indlæg : 477 Age : 31 Location : Esbjerg Registration date : 27/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 4:00 pm
theirstargirl skrev:
sarahXlovesXmcfly skrev:
Årh det er et godt afsnit ! - Jeg tror det er Harrys gamle kæreste der afbryder dem, men nu får vi at se, hehe. det er i hvert fald rigtig godt. Fortsæt på denne super måde smukke.
Tusind tak, søde Ja, det bliver sørme spændende at høre hvem det er (;
Ja man
mcflys Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 883 Age : 30 Location : Silkeborg Registration date : 24/01/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 4:43 pm
rigtig godt afsnit. :b Du skriver mega godt, mere snart.
Annesteg Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1416 Age : 31 Location : Jylland Registration date : 26/06/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 5:00 pm
mcflys skrev:
rigtig godt afsnit. :b Du skriver mega godt, mere snart.
Tusind tak
NannaBoelt Star Girl
Antal indlæg : 1092 Age : 31 Location : Roskilde Katedralskole Registration date : 03/05/08
Emne: Sv: The Unexpected Søn Sep 14, 2008 6:52 pm
sarahXlovesXmcfly skrev:
Årh det er et godt afsnit ! - Jeg tror det er Harrys gamle kæreste der afbryder dem, men nu får vi at se, hehe. det er i hvert fald rigtig godt. Fortsæt på denne super måde smukke.
Det tror jeg også , men man kan aldrig vide det .. Hehe, glæder mig i hvertifald til at høre mere ..